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08-25-2006, 08:11 AM	#1
Cloves Rodrigues I WANT WORRRRRRK!!! Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 411	Bishop This work is for the Rick Madisson of faithstarcomics. If it calls the Nineth Bishop. I have liked very. I wait that they like.

08-25-2006, 09:15 AM	#2
jedipencil Claws 'R Us Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Quebec Posts: 4,054	This is for a book you are doing, Cloves? I like!! My favorite panel is the second panel on the second page... __________________ www.rabidhorse.com Rabid Horse Illustrations Twitter-Me-Timbers I'm a Deviant too.... "Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic." - Arthur C. Clarke

08-25-2006, 09:23 AM	#3
Cloves Rodrigues I WANT WORRRRRRK!!! Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 411	Hi jedi, very thanks. I do not know I will be myself a book or Web… It participates of this fórum… if he calls faithstarr1 it visits http://www.faithstarcomics.com/ Last edited by Cloves Rodrigues : 08-25-2006 at 09:47 AM.

09-19-2006, 08:01 AM	#4
Cloves Rodrigues I WANT WORRRRRRK!!! Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 411	sorry for the English evil… the guilt is of google…. Last edited by Cloves Rodrigues : 09-19-2006 at 08:34 AM.

09-19-2006, 11:38 AM	#5
Cloves Rodrigues I WANT WORRRRRRK!!! Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 411	commentaries? please

09-19-2006, 02:50 PM	#6
egets Color cracker Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Britain Posts: 197	I like the first page and how you did draw bishop only one thing that worries me is the rain because its coverin sometimes the entire background, of course sometimes it can rain so much that you cant even see the background very well but when it is a drawing it only makes you feel like the artist is like cheating or something while if he even isnt What I like most about your drawing style is that its very neat and readable and the anatomy of the ppl are so well done, it looks like you used ruler or some grid for drawing aid and while it usually disturbs me as if its taking too much emotion and personality away in this case its not worrieng me it only makes it look professional.

09-19-2006, 04:29 PM	#7
bullet Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hidden Pirate Island Posts: 39	Everything looks great, my only comment would be on the "hits" they just don't seem to show any real impact or force behind them. As a veiwer I don't feel them being hit and I'm not wowed by the power from the attacks. Honestly other than that, Great work!!!

09-19-2006, 06:26 PM	#8
Phatman Cat Scratch Fever Redwood Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Drenchville, Soggyton Posts: 3,490	Cloves: Nice storytelling. Your figures are well done, but I think your backgrounds need to improve. Overall, very good.

09-19-2006, 07:20 PM	#9
Wayne Drake Not a Pro Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: SoCal Posts: 3,622	fourth Page , panel 1: That's no way to swing a sledge hammer. The elbow looks like it's been snapped or something, and the wrist is twisted, ouch. the widescreen approach is cool, but you wanna always mix it up so the reader doesn't get bored.

09-19-2006, 09:59 PM	#10
Caio Reis Registered User Join Date: May 2006 Location: Brazil Posts: 454	Ótimo trabalho, Clóvis! VC deu um grande salto na tua arte! Cuidado com as cenas de ação: elas precisam ser mais exageradas, mais impactantes. O painel 3, na 1a pagina, por exemplo ficou extremamente estático, paradão, não tá dando a impressão de que o cara tá levando uma marretada no coco! Bota mais força nesses personages que vai ficar mto melhor!

09-20-2006, 06:12 AM	#11
Arne S. working class hero Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: germany Posts: 465	good drawings, but there could be more differences between the faces (not only different hair) and you could work a little on motion/dynamic of the figures (in action).

09-20-2006, 08:45 AM	#12
Cloves Rodrigues I WANT WORRRRRRK!!! Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 411	I understand. good part of spoken I understand. my English is not good. it wanted to answer. I only can be thankful. Very thanks

09-22-2006, 08:04 AM	#13
Cloves Rodrigues I WANT WORRRRRRK!!! Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 411	I started the colors

09-22-2006, 09:03 AM	#14
jedipencil Claws 'R Us Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Quebec Posts: 4,054	Hey cool Cloves! You will soon see your colors are MUCH better than mine! __________________ www.rabidhorse.com Rabid Horse Illustrations Twitter-Me-Timbers I'm a Deviant too.... "Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic." - Arthur C. Clarke

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I like these alot Cloves. Loved the rain scenes...keep it up my friend!

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