A panel from my webcomic...

Gwlister · 08-17-2006, 08:25 AM

Hey gang --

Here's a panel from my new webcomic, "Morganna of the Borgs". I do the entire thing - writing, pencils, inks and lettering. I'm not the most confident of inkers so I wanted to get everyone's critiques and comments on the inkwork.

Go to www.listerart.com and click on the COMIX link in the navigation bar if you'd like to see the rest.

Thanks!

mikeexner3 · 08-19-2006, 11:13 PM

The art is amazing, Gary. I'm not a really good critic when it comes to inks, but the entire package looks really impressive here. I think the heavy blacks really make the characters (especially the cat/victims on the right) pop. There is a typo in the lettering, though. Shame, shame.

Gwlister · 08-20-2006, 12:15 PM

GAH! I've read that panel over and over again and I didn't catch the typo! I'm fixing it right NOW. I think I've shown it to others and nobody has said anything -- thanks for bringing to my attention otherwise it would probably hang out there on the web like that forever.

Care to proof read the rest of my site?

Gwlister · 08-20-2006, 12:45 PM

Typo fixed! whew!

ChromeSamurai · 09-03-2006, 07:16 AM

Man, that's high production for a webcomic. Great to see someone put that much into it. Your line weights rock and I agree, the blacks give it this feel like one of the old Heavy Metal comics from back in the day or something. That's a good thing.

BW Fan · 09-05-2006, 10:34 PM

That's some good work, as always. Really liking the grayscale, too!

comixnut · 09-07-2006, 08:14 AM

the comic looks totally awesome man! when i have a chance of reading it all ill let you know what i think of the story!

08-17-2006, 08:25 AM	#1
Gwlister Artist, Cynic, Wiseguy Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Jefferson City, Missouri Posts: 239	A panel from my webcomic... Hey gang -- Here's a panel from my new webcomic, "Morganna of the Borgs". I do the entire thing - writing, pencils, inks and lettering. I'm not the most confident of inkers so I wanted to get everyone's critiques and comments on the inkwork. Go to www.listerart.com and click on the COMIX link in the navigation bar if you'd like to see the rest. Thanks! __________________ Graphic Artist & illustrator Pencils, Inks & Letters LISTERART.COM Last edited by Gwlister; 08-17-2006 at 11:17 AM.

08-19-2006, 11:13 PM	#2
mikeexner3 I writ gud? Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: San Mateo, California Posts: 2,233	The art is amazing, Gary. I'm not a really good critic when it comes to inks, but the entire package looks really impressive here. I think the heavy blacks really make the characters (especially the cat/victims on the right) pop. There is a typo in the lettering, though. Shame, shame. __________________ Mike Exner III - I am... Exlactus! Devourer of words... mikeexner3@gmail.com

08-20-2006, 12:15 PM	#3
Gwlister Artist, Cynic, Wiseguy Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Jefferson City, Missouri Posts: 239	GAH! I've read that panel over and over again and I didn't catch the typo! I'm fixing it right NOW. I think I've shown it to others and nobody has said anything -- thanks for bringing to my attention otherwise it would probably hang out there on the web like that forever. Care to proof read the rest of my site? __________________ Graphic Artist & illustrator Pencils, Inks & Letters LISTERART.COM

08-20-2006, 12:45 PM	#4
Gwlister Artist, Cynic, Wiseguy Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Jefferson City, Missouri Posts: 239	Typo fixed! whew! __________________ Graphic Artist & illustrator Pencils, Inks & Letters LISTERART.COM

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09-03-2006, 07:16 AM	#5
ChromeSamurai Editing Monkey Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 32	Man, that's high production for a webcomic. Great to see someone put that much into it. Your line weights rock and I agree, the blacks give it this feel like one of the old Heavy Metal comics from back in the day or something. That's a good thing.

09-05-2006, 10:34 PM	#6
BW Fan Ed says 'Hi!' Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: NC Posts: 939	That's some good work, as always. Really liking the grayscale, too!

09-07-2006, 08:14 AM	#7
comixnut Registered User Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 46	the comic looks totally awesome man! when i have a chance of reading it all ill let you know what i think of the story!