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Old 08-10-2006, 11:58 PM   #1
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need some help

im working on a story(that i hope to one day be a graphic novel), and this guy ( a former cage fighter,big guy though, think Marv from Sin City meets Kane{the wrestler}) 'dies'. he comes back and gets a new identity, but i haven't come up with a new job for his new identity.

help me pls! thnx.
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Old 08-11-2006, 12:05 AM   #2
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does someone back from the dead need a job?

he could be a bouncer at a night club. I guess.
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Old 08-11-2006, 12:11 AM   #3
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How about something poetic, like a late-night morgue attendant. He could literally stumble into the job.
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Old 08-11-2006, 03:25 AM   #4
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Or for the sake of comedy, he could be a kindergarten teacher.
No seriously. It would rock.
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Old 08-11-2006, 09:37 AM   #5
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I know when I see a story that consist of someone returning from the dead, the number one thing I think is what type of job can this character get. I would suggest extra in zombie horror movies.
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Old 08-11-2006, 09:42 AM   #6
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Do you mean to say he returns in a supernatural way, or that he fakes his death?
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Old 08-11-2006, 09:59 AM   #7
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Simple, have him get jobs through a temp agency. That way he can do part time work that doesn't tie him down or get him in trouble when he has to disappear for days or weeks on end.

http://www.salary.com/careers/layout...05_Par202.html
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Old 08-11-2006, 10:07 AM   #8
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I think alot depends on the circumstances of his 'death'. If he was a violent guy it might be nice to see him at a desk job. Think like in the Incredibles.
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Old 08-11-2006, 11:45 AM   #9
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he fakes his death, he doesn't come back as a zombie. the kindergarten teacher/temp agency/desk job are all appealing, thnx guys. keep'em coming.

that and tha s.hit is bananas, b-a-n-a-n-a-s!
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Old 08-11-2006, 04:33 PM   #10
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Bit of a rip-off, but how bout a hero/detective for hire?
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Old 08-11-2006, 04:39 PM   #11
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You're working on a story that you want to turn into a GN but you don't even know basics of who your character is?!

How far along is this "story"?
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Old 08-11-2006, 06:14 PM   #12
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He becomes a "born-again" preacher!
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Old 08-12-2006, 01:01 AM   #13
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im only on the second chapter, besides this is a rough draft. ive sketched out like the big details and ive got alot of other supporting characters details done.
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Old 08-12-2006, 09:50 AM   #14
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im working on a story(that i hope to one day be a graphic novel), and this guy ( a former cage fighter,big guy though, think Marv from Sin City meets Kane{the wrestler}) 'dies'. he comes back and gets a new identity, but i haven't come up with a new job for his new identity.

help me pls! thnx.
Not to nit-pick, but where does this story take place. This could help in finding said character a job. Is he decomposing as the story goes or simply picked up where his life left off with a new identity. By new identity do you reconstruction or in name only. I am not trying to be a pest or anything just trying to help construct a scenario.
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Old 08-13-2006, 12:04 AM   #15
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it takes place in a fictional city, Corazon City. a mix of a Gotham and Basin(Sin) City.
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