superman dies...july 4, 2006

wisper · 06-30-2006, 02:36 AM

cover:\
new mexico/ U.S.A.
old rt.66 section hwy /
black /gov. looking/tractor trailer truck fliped over / glowing kryptnight contents visible
"daily planet" logo /suv/ smashed into side of truck trailer/kryptnight exposed
clark kent behind wheel of SUV....dieing.

pg1
splash page.
SUV windshield smashed out/clark kents face..sweating/puffed up/unconsious/reflection of glowing kryptnight in his glasses/slumped over SUV steering wheel/ air bag deployed/air bag white powder mixing w/sweat/ his hand limp on tie.bearly breathing...
xm radio/on dash/ broadcasting news about nuclear terrious blast in Sweden.

pg2
pannel1
viewed from above/
wreck layout w/hwy signs welcome to new mexico
tangled wreckage/dark smoldering smoke
driver of truck wondering dazed towards wreckage of daily planet SUV
xm radio news broadcast " terrioust denoiate nuclear device @ yastad, Sweden in retalitaion of their radical leader held by Swedish athority's"

pannel2
truck driver pulls clark kend through broken SUV windshield.
Clark kent limp/
truck driver " you'll alright, I promise"

pannel 3
accident wreckage in background/truck driver trying desperately to revive clark kent.
truck driver yelling @ clark kent " you any gona die, you ant gona die"
visible kryptnight dust on clark kents face/nostrils
old winobago in background ariving along accident sceen

pannel 4
very old man carrying doctor's bag /
scurrying from parked old winobago towards the two accident victoms.
wreckage in background smoldering...kryptnight dust mixed w/smoke
truck drive very upset yelling
" look,he don't look hurt"

pg3
pannel1
truck driver crying
holding clark kent's lifeless body
looking up @ old man visitor..
truck driver.."he don't look hurt, he don't look....."

pannel 2
old man visitor attending clark kent/
truck driver /shock look on his face..
talking to old man visitor
" what are you
doing"

pannel 3
old man visitor/clark kent/truck driver grouped together
old winobago in background voice comming from inside
"three point one four minuets counting...."

pannel 4
old man visitor pulling syringe from doctors bag
standing over clark kents lifeless body
truck driver..."he's gone...he;s gone..."

pg4
pannel 1
old man visitor holding syring sticking in clark kent's left forearm
truck driver in tears staring from behind
voice from old winobago
"were not gona make it radio says them terrious leader says #2 bomb in Houston"

pannel 2
old man visitor scurrying back to old winobago w/ doctors bag clenched to his chest
clark kent's lifeless body lyeing on gound
truck driver standing yelling @ old man visitor " hey, what are you doing?"

pannel 3
truck driver running towards old winobago as it blast passed the wreckage sceen.
old woman visitor driver tosses out antique birdcage w/3 parakeets inside...
" if the bird's die we all are lost"

pannel 4
old winobago traveling down old hwy 66 @ a high rate of speed east towards texas
old visitor woman driver w/worried look
old man visitor standing putting syringe in old winobago's refrigerator
xm radio " terrioust leader held in Sweden says Houston's next"

pg5
pannel 1
inside old winobago
old woman visitor driving

"let us pray....oh time of THE Creator...be with the force of love, for the light of yours has no color"

pannel 2
winobago traveling down old rt 66
emergency equiptment passing going to sceen of the accident.
old man visitor injecting himself with the syring he has removed from the winobago's refrigator
" only the survivers will write the truth"

pannel 3
huge fireball/ bright flash engolfs old winibago from above

pannel 4
new mexico/texas border old rt 66 sceen
only a pink haze floating about the hwy
broken syring laying on road
a pair of lizzards scurry to shade on the side of the road

pg6
pannel1

**Buckyrig** · 07-04-2006, 11:30 PM

Confusing.

I get the gist of the scene, but it looks more like notes for yourself to draw something.

The Anti-crest · 07-05-2006, 01:38 AM

Buckyrig is right. You should give us a little more detail about what we should see. If you are having someone draw it, it is best to be able to tell them what to draw and how to draw it.

06-30-2006, 02:36 AM	#1
wisper Isreal/Iran October 2008 Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Send Money. Maryland 20910 ,U.S.A. Posts: 3,557	superman dies...july 4, 2006 cover:\ new mexico/ U.S.A. old rt.66 section hwy / black /gov. looking/tractor trailer truck fliped over / glowing kryptnight contents visible "daily planet" logo /suv/ smashed into side of truck trailer/kryptnight exposed clark kent behind wheel of SUV....dieing. pg1 splash page. SUV windshield smashed out/clark kents face..sweating/puffed up/unconsious/reflection of glowing kryptnight in his glasses/slumped over SUV steering wheel/ air bag deployed/air bag white powder mixing w/sweat/ his hand limp on tie.bearly breathing... xm radio/on dash/ broadcasting news about nuclear terrious blast in Sweden. pg2 pannel1 viewed from above/ wreck layout w/hwy signs welcome to new mexico tangled wreckage/dark smoldering smoke driver of truck wondering dazed towards wreckage of daily planet SUV xm radio news broadcast " terrioust denoiate nuclear device @ yastad, Sweden in retalitaion of their radical leader held by Swedish athority's" pannel2 truck driver pulls clark kend through broken SUV windshield. Clark kent limp/ truck driver " you'll alright, I promise" pannel 3 accident wreckage in background/truck driver trying desperately to revive clark kent. truck driver yelling @ clark kent " you any gona die, you ant gona die" visible kryptnight dust on clark kents face/nostrils old winobago in background ariving along accident sceen pannel 4 very old man carrying doctor's bag / scurrying from parked old winobago towards the two accident victoms. wreckage in background smoldering...kryptnight dust mixed w/smoke truck drive very upset yelling " look,he don't look hurt" pg3 pannel1 truck driver crying holding clark kent's lifeless body looking up @ old man visitor.. truck driver.."he don't look hurt, he don't look....." pannel 2 old man visitor attending clark kent/ truck driver /shock look on his face.. talking to old man visitor " what are you doing" pannel 3 old man visitor/clark kent/truck driver grouped together old winobago in background voice comming from inside "three point one four minuets counting...." pannel 4 old man visitor pulling syringe from doctors bag standing over clark kents lifeless body truck driver..."he's gone...he;s gone..." pg4 pannel 1 old man visitor holding syring sticking in clark kent's left forearm truck driver in tears staring from behind voice from old winobago "were not gona make it radio says them terrious leader says #2 bomb in Houston" pannel 2 old man visitor scurrying back to old winobago w/ doctors bag clenched to his chest clark kent's lifeless body lyeing on gound truck driver standing yelling @ old man visitor " hey, what are you doing?" pannel 3 truck driver running towards old winobago as it blast passed the wreckage sceen. old woman visitor driver tosses out antique birdcage w/3 parakeets inside... " if the bird's die we all are lost" pannel 4 old winobago traveling down old hwy 66 @ a high rate of speed east towards texas old visitor woman driver w/worried look old man visitor standing putting syringe in old winobago's refrigerator xm radio " terrioust leader held in Sweden says Houston's next" pg5 pannel 1 inside old winobago old woman visitor driving "let us pray....oh time of THE Creator...be with the force of love, for the light of yours has no color" pannel 2 winobago traveling down old rt 66 emergency equiptment passing going to sceen of the accident. old man visitor injecting himself with the syring he has removed from the winobago's refrigator " only the survivers will write the truth" pannel 3 huge fireball/ bright flash engolfs old winibago from above pannel 4 new mexico/texas border old rt 66 sceen only a pink haze floating about the hwy broken syring laying on road a pair of lizzards scurry to shade on the side of the road pg6 pannel1

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07-04-2006, 11:30 PM	#2
Buckyrig I Coulda Had a VH Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Steve Buscemi's Couch Posts: 11,599	Confusing. I get the gist of the scene, but it looks more like notes for yourself to draw something.

07-05-2006, 01:38 AM	#3
The Anti-crest Robert Tidwell - JUGGALO Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,554	Buckyrig is right. You should give us a little more detail about what we should see. If you are having someone draw it, it is best to be able to tell them what to draw and how to draw it.