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Thumbs up [DW Projects] Hellboy pages

Below are the penciled pages to Hellboy Meets The Thing: If This Be My Cigar. (Shut up! It's a great title!)

Story by Pauly and Joie
(f)art by Mister Simmons
Letters soon to be by the Grand poohbah eDuke

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Cool, eh, well we figured that the first page wasn't very Kirbyish and Mister Simmons went back to the drawing board and redesigned it...



Then my eight year old got into the act and drew a piece of fan art on his whiteboard.

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Here's page two in early stages of being colored.



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Thats gonna be great.
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Here's a look into my "brilliant" mind when I put a draft together.

I still need to edit it so Mr. Dukeshire can letter the thing.

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Baxter building. Hellboy falls out of a portal inside the Baxter building... drops his cigar, The Thing picks it up, asks Hellboy; "need a light?" lights the cigar with his own cigar, portal opens... Hellboy says; "Mighty kind of you gruesome." enters into the portal on another wall ... The other Fantastic Four appear as Hellboy disappears, Reed asks Ben; "who was that...?" The Thing shrugs, "no idea, but I like his style."

Four pages? Edit: ended up being three pages.

1 Baxter building.
(OP) ONE MILLION NINE HUNDRED AND SIXTY EIGHT
TITLE/CREDITS/OTHER STUFF

2 The Thing is doing some bench presses. Herbie is counting.
ONE MILLION NINE HUNDRED AND SIXTY NINE
A weird portal appears near the pair.
BZZZT
Hellboy falls out of the thing. (heeee)
His cigar hits the floor.
Hellboy picks it up.

3 The Thing and Hellboy (cigar in his mouth) standing nose to nose (Hellboy I think is taller.) talking. Herbie is off panel or in the background.
1 Thing - WHAT DO THEY CALL YOU, RED?
1 Hellboy - HELLBOY.
2 Thing - SUPPOSE THAT MAKES SENSE.
2 HERB, GIVE GRUESOME HERE A LIGHT.
Herbie is lighting Hellboyís cigar.
2 Hellboy - THANKS SPARKY.
Hellboy,The Thing and Herbie stand together. Hellboy has his cigar in his mouth. The weird portal opens in the foreground.
3 - Hellboy - LOOKS LIKE THATíS MY EXIT.
3 Thing - YEP.

4 Hellboy entered/pulled into the weird portal
The other members of the Four are there. Reed and The Thing are talking.
1 Reed - BEN, WHO WAS THAT?
2 I DONíT KNOW. BUT, I LIKE HIS STYLE.
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Nice! Funny, short and clever, well done.

One tiny nitpick: In the pages above, since the cigar is falling out of Ben's mouth in surprise in the panel where the portal appears, it kind of looks like Red is picking up Ben's cigar and not his own. Easily fixable by drawing a second cigar held in Ben's teeth in the panel, though.
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Nice! Funny, short and clever, well done.

One tiny nitpick: In the pages above, since the cigar is falling out of Ben's mouth in surprise in the panel where the portal appears, it kind of looks like Red is picking up Ben's cigar and not his own. Easily fixable by drawing a second cigar held in Ben's teeth in the panel, though.
And that is the joke> Hellboy is picking up Ben's cigar.
Very cool.
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Fun stuff.. I like this new evolution of Joie's art, the sketchy look of the inks and coloring.
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Nice! Funny, short and clever, well done.

One tiny nitpick: In the pages above, since the cigar is falling out of Ben's mouth in surprise in the panel where the portal appears, it kind of looks like Red is picking up Ben's cigar and not his own. Easily fixable by drawing a second cigar held in Ben's teeth in the panel, though.

Thanks for the kind words.

That's the gag. Hellboy picks up Benji's stogie.
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And that is the joke> Hellboy is picking up Ben's cigar.
Very cool.
Thanks for the assist.
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Thanks for the kind words.

That's the gag. Hellboy picks up Benji's stogie.
Ah okay. Never mind then.
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I've been trying to do shorter/ smaller projects lately.. Just did a one-page Trump strip:
http://TimRocksComics.blogspot.com

Of course everyone's sick of hearing about him.. All presidents get so much media saturation it's ridiculous. But still.. he's like a living cartoon anyway, and I wanted to see if I could translate that into actual comics.
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Ain't that the truth.

That's some funny writing!
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