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Old 11-30-2017, 02:57 PM   #1
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Old 11-30-2017, 03:10 PM   #2
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Hy Guys ,, some critics how i can improve the inks , comments are welcome , Thank you
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its hard to judge inks without being able to see the pencils they are worked over. so that would help. some of the inks look okay, but there are some places where it looks like you didn't know what to do or translated the pencils in a weird way.
an example is the batman with the claw thingys... a bunch of incompleted lines that look unsure and unfinished. what did the pencils look like on this one?

but like I said..some other stuff is better... the very bottom colored page looks pretty slick. tho the colors on most of the other pages looks just awful. so...id like to see more. show pencils AND inks.

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,,its hard to judge inks without being able to see the pencils they are worked over.''
- Most of them are made over my drawings - at least comics pages

,, but there are some places where it looks like you didn't know what to do''
- I look like a artist who don't know what to do?

- check my gallery https://laur2000ad.deviantart.com/gallery/ , maybe i know what i do

,, the very bottom colored page looks pretty slick. tho the colors on most of the other pages looks just awful.;;

- they are awfull at colors? Becouse they don't match your taste for darkish art? Again check other colors and maybe you don't put in front your personal taste of art when you critics somebody else art.

Aniway , i post here for proffesional feedback and critics , and i don't receive proffesional feedback

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,,its hard to judge inks without being able to see the pencils they are worked over.''
- Most of them are made over my drawings - at least comics pages

,, but there are some places where it looks like you didn't know what to do''
- I look like a artist who don't know what to do?

- check my gallery https://laur2000ad.deviantart.com/gallery/ , maybe i know what i do

,, the very bottom colored page looks pretty slick. tho the colors on most of the other pages looks just awful.;;

- they are awfull at colors? Becouse they don't match your taste for darkish art? Again check other colors and maybe you don't put in front your personal taste of art when you critics somebody else art.

Aniway , i post here for proffesional feedback and critics , and i don't receive proffesional feedback
you asked for critiques, and I gave you my opinion.

Ill say them again. your inks are not great. it helps to see what the pencils were before you inked them. but yes..i am saying your inks are not good. they are wobbly and unrefined and don't look good. yes..i am saying that in places, you don't seem to know what you are doing. you are placing style that you think is awesome before understanding what actually works.

I did check your gallery. your coloring is horrible.
and your responses are of one who doesn't want to hear any critiques, cause you just responded by saying that you know what you are doing and for me to not put my "personal tastes" before my critique. all anyone has IS their personal taste. and mine says your coloring is terrible and your inking needs lots of work.

but you apparently don't want to hear that. you just want to hear how awesome you are.
I will not say that when its not true.
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Ok , i try to be cool with you . https://robnor101.deviantart.com/gallery/ , you think at your level are in position to make statments about art? And with this i finish this chat with you . Goodnight
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ok man , to explain my point . This ,,unfinished '' lines are made with purpose by me . Not by a man ,,who don't know what he doing''. It's about how i see some stuff , and how you see from your level. You understand? It's a diference of perception of art , of life , of work.


With other words i think it's just cool to make him unfinished
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Ok , i try to be cool with you . https://robnor101.deviantart.com/gallery/ , you think at your level are in position to make statments about art? And with this i finish this chat with you . Goodnight
wow. this isn't about ME. this is about you, and YOUR art, and you asking for critiques. and then when you get them and don't like them, you act like this? and posting a link to MY art. that's a joke.

I on the other hand am more than happy to hear others thoughts on my work and how I can improve it and make it better. because my ultimate goal is to get as good as I can be.

you don't want that obviously. so...good luck
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I explain in previous post . Yes i know only with critics we make evolution , but yours have some statments who are not true . So i don't take it.
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I explain in previous post . Yes i know only with critics we make evolution , but yours have some statments who are not true . So i don't take it.
oh my god.

you cant just scribble down any old stuff you want and expect people to marvel at how amazing you are because its your "style, or life perception or whatever".

it looks terrible.

good luck with your attitude though.
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Sorry , i was to rough with you . Thank you for your feedback and keep up .
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I can see someone getting virtually no crits from now on.

If you can't listen and take on board the good points and the weak points, it will be tricky to improve.
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