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Old 10-24-2013, 04:48 PM   #1
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Wolverine Sample Pages

Hi guys,
These are some Wolverine pages I did recently.
Done digitaly on Cintiq 13HD. Let me know what you think.





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Old 10-24-2013, 05:26 PM   #2
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Great stuff!

Love the style and fluid storytelling.

There is something about the last panel on page 1 that I'm not liking. I'm not sure if it's the ceiling fan or the bottles and paper behind the bar.
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Old 10-24-2013, 05:52 PM   #3
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I like how you kept realism in faces and expressions, you didnt go for "cool" and thats what i like about your art.
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Old 10-24-2013, 07:41 PM   #4
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@InkerMatteO- Thanks,glad you like it. Maybe fan looks too flat compared with the rest of the panel.

@ld-airgrafix- thank you very much.
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Old 10-24-2013, 11:00 PM   #5
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Good pages. The FAN breaks the perspective and takes away some depth.
Just lose it.
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Wow. Nice.
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Thanks guys!
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Good pages overall. Biggest issue is that we never see a bird's eye view. Marvel editors are big on that. They want to see varying angles, but helpful ones to the story. You got varying angles, but nothing that places the characters in relationship to each other and the entire scene. Even if it was just a small panel on the first page giving us a good view of the entire bar.
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Thanks,and thank you for the crit!
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Old 10-26-2013, 11:34 AM   #10
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I think that the fact that you have that old man knocking the Hell out of that biker guy is choice. The power effects on the old man's fist, even before he lets it fly, does the trick.

I don't care for that speckled background that you use in numerous panels, but the old man's reaction sets the stage.

Who needs Wolverine? The old guy was doing just fine, without him.
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@Charles
Idea here,was actually to make it look like the old man punching the biker guy(but we never see him actual punching him)but when we see page 3,it should be obvious that it was the Wolverine whos punching the guy. And those are just focus lines to make our eye focus on his fist and onto the next panel. Purpose here was to show how proud and bold old vet is.
Seems like I didnt do my job that well.
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Top notch...I'd buy the issue
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Yeah, I thought the old vet punched the biker..... might need to edit/rework the layout.
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I love the mood and feel of the setting. It comes across very strong. I was confused about who actually threw the punch, as I saw the older gentleman pull back. He seemed unsure in his next panel but then I noticed Logan's fist. Great touch. Can't wait to see more. I love panel #3.
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*Sorry, I will be sure to read ALL of the posts before commenting in the future.
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