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Old 07-10-2013, 04:20 AM   #1
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Lightbulb Wonder Woman - the movie

Started this last week, basically the MoS got the ball rolling for more DC movies and I thought of trying to turn the WW story into something more accessible to joe public.
I thought of doing storyboards, but ended up using the comic format instead.


To ease your way in, just picture the narraction done by Galadriel at the beginning of Lord of The Rings.


WONDER WOMAN - In The name Of The Mother











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Old 07-10-2013, 09:15 AM   #2
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dont stop now! This is awesome!!
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Old 07-10-2013, 06:15 PM   #3
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Thanks, Kors, but Im only thinking of doing 10 or so pages, just the setup of the story.
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I love this, the last panel last page, red cape flowing is just immaculate, not to mention the colors. Is this for actual ww or just a personal project?
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Beautiful, excellent work. This is a Wonder Woman book I would buy!
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Phenomenal pages, Zeu--artwork and story are both superb!
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Tasty!
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You need to submit this to DC. Hell, I'd buy it. You've made the character interesting again since George Perez was doing the book.
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I dont even like WW and I'd buy it....
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Pro standard work! Amazing.
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Love this!
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Old 07-14-2013, 03:41 AM   #13
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Wow, so many repplies... damn, you guys are too nice, thanks!

Id-airgrafix, thanks, man, that is one of my favorite pannels too.

Thank you, Bishop, you've made my day.
That is the highest compliment an artist can aspire to.

Yo, nams! Thanks, cool to see you still around.

Hi, Gilby! Thank you so much!

Hey, Paul! Thanks!

Hi, jeffo! Nah, sending this to DC would just end up in a drawer, this is just an old comic fan having fun trying to picture how to approach a WW movie.

Thanks, Kors!

Thank you, Stuey!

And Lord Feijj, muchas gracias! Danke! Arigato!





And thus we've endeth the prologue.
Six pages on narration... whew, that was one lenghty prologue, did Galadriel speak this much on the Lord of The Rings opening?
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Old 07-15-2013, 04:24 AM   #14
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Hi Eliseu,
Gorgeous pages!
Just one thing, I see too much dead space and everything is too far away from camera.
Good for European comics, working for the middle ground to backgrounds.
But American concept needs more contrast of sizes and volume.
What is in the foreground and close-ups should be bigger and closer.
Also, you have a lot of stuff in these panels that deserve to be seen closer.
This is what I trying to show you.
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