Jonah Hex

CWmax · 07-24-2012, 07:40 AM

Here's a pic...

Let me know what you think.

Thanks,
CW

OZ! · 07-24-2012, 11:09 AM

Great motion. BUT the horse is in perspective and Jonah is not.

JAM · 07-25-2012, 02:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CWmax

Here's a pic...

Let me know what you think.

Thanks,
CW

Lookin DAM good CW(working on other complimentary words

)

Only crit is Jonahs right leg-- I think his knee should be more pronounced and less detail on the horses jaw more detail on his neck.
All I have! Nothing written in stone.
CW you've been pounding the drawing board for some time and it's more than paid off my man! Lookin good.

JAM,.............................................. .......
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JMelloul · 07-25-2012, 03:21 AM

I'm not an artist, but while I do like this the way Jonah is sitting on the horse makes his lower body seem way too disproportionate and twisted for my tastes. I do think you did his upper body and the horse quite well, though.

j giar · 07-25-2012, 02:30 PM

Actually I like this a lot....you can fix the proportion or perspective issue pretty easy. The hind quarter of the horse is drawn in such a way that it makes Jonahs seated position off. If you were to erase a bit and draw that section coming out further....that would fix it. Two things you may want to keep in mind. I dig how you rendered the horse. Allowing the lines to follow shape and form. You should have done the same with Jonah. All the straight lines make him appear flat and uninteresting. And second...this a pet peeve...judging by the horses head and left leg position, Jonah appears to be pulling the horse to the left. There should be no slack in the horses reins on the left. And yes...I was raised around horses. Great job on this though...

Saul Haber · 07-25-2012, 11:43 PM

Great job on this. The horse kicking up dust came out especially well.

ponyrl · 07-28-2012, 03:16 AM

his right is akward and his forearm in perspective needs to be reworked. His revolver looks too big, did you ref the size?

07-24-2012, 07:40 AM	#1
CWmax Random Access Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: A little town called none of your goddam business Posts: 775	Jonah Hex Here's a pic... Let me know what you think. Thanks, CW

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07-24-2012, 11:09 AM	#2
OZ! All Powerful Wizard Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Texas Posts: 4,501	Great motion. BUT the horse is in perspective and Jonah is not.

07-25-2012, 03:21 AM	#4
JMelloul Registered User Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 43	I'm not an artist, but while I do like this the way Jonah is sitting on the horse makes his lower body seem way too disproportionate and twisted for my tastes. I do think you did his upper body and the horse quite well, though.

07-25-2012, 02:30 PM	#5
j giar Has nothing to add. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Elyria, Ohio Posts: 5,968	Actually I like this a lot....you can fix the proportion or perspective issue pretty easy. The hind quarter of the horse is drawn in such a way that it makes Jonahs seated position off. If you were to erase a bit and draw that section coming out further....that would fix it. Two things you may want to keep in mind. I dig how you rendered the horse. Allowing the lines to follow shape and form. You should have done the same with Jonah. All the straight lines make him appear flat and uninteresting. And second...this a pet peeve...judging by the horses head and left leg position, Jonah appears to be pulling the horse to the left. There should be no slack in the horses reins on the left. And yes...I was raised around horses. Great job on this though...

07-25-2012, 11:43 PM	#6
Saul Haber Registered User Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,581	Great job on this. The horse kicking up dust came out especially well.

07-28-2012, 03:16 AM	#7
ponyrl A True Omen Spirit Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: New York Posts: 5,294	his right is akward and his forearm in perspective needs to be reworked. His revolver looks too big, did you ref the size?