Hulks and the Fantastic Four - Page 2

virtuabutch · 03-23-2012, 08:53 PM

Another change on the FF piece. Turned them towards the viewer more.

Scriptron · 03-23-2012, 09:15 PM

The start of something awesome!

virtuabutch · 03-23-2012, 10:34 PM

Hope so! Thanks for stopping by.

virtuabutch · 03-24-2012, 07:33 PM

Another update--

OZ! · 03-25-2012, 07:27 AM

Yup. I was right to be excited.

**carynord** · 03-25-2012, 09:58 AM

There's a lot of awesome happening in that FF piece. it looks like you lost a little of the spontaneity and effortless gesture of the original sketch to the next stage when you started tightening up.
I liked sue's leg position best in the sketch as it brought the eye right back into the center of the picture rather than down into the corner. And I also liked Reed's short arm in the original sketch as opposed to how you have it now where it again, draws the eye down into the bottom left corner instead of the center.

That background is killer!

virtuabutch · 03-26-2012, 08:51 AM

Update!

Cary, thank you for the comments and crits! I shall take them to heart and fix up the piece. I think I'm happy with Reed's left arm, but I should open his arm to lead the viewer back to the middle. And I'l change Sue's leg too.

Thank you so much for stopping by!

Oz, you too, thanks! Hope this update is in the right direction.

thejaz180 · 03-28-2012, 10:41 AM

I honestly luv them all, the ones with the corrections, I wanna show luv to pic A only ‘cause I’m a simple guy who likes shots that work out this way, but of course pic B is the cooler one of the two, but wait, it looks like you combined the two concepts in your final pic, the Hulk piece is cool too, awesome stuff, I’m digging it.

03-25-2012, 09:58 AM	#21
carynord Moderator Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Canada Posts: 1,321	There's a lot of awesome happening in that FF piece. it looks like you lost a little of the spontaneity and effortless gesture of the original sketch to the next stage when you started tightening up. I liked sue's leg position best in the sketch as it brought the eye right back into the center of the picture rather than down into the corner. And I also liked Reed's short arm in the original sketch as opposed to how you have it now where it again, draws the eye down into the bottom left corner instead of the center. That background is killer! __________________ http://cary-nord.blogspot.com/

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03-23-2012, 08:53 PM	#16
virtuabutch The Professional Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 114	Another change on the FF piece. Turned them towards the viewer more.

03-23-2012, 09:15 PM	#17
Scriptron Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 125	The start of something awesome!

03-23-2012, 10:34 PM	#18
virtuabutch The Professional Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 114	Hope so! Thanks for stopping by.

03-24-2012, 07:33 PM	#19
virtuabutch The Professional Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 114	Another update--

03-25-2012, 07:27 AM	#20
OZ! All Powerful Wizard Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Texas Posts: 4,501	Yup. I was right to be excited.

03-26-2012, 08:51 AM	#22
virtuabutch The Professional Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 114	Update! Cary, thank you for the comments and crits! I shall take them to heart and fix up the piece. I think I'm happy with Reed's left arm, but I should open his arm to lead the viewer back to the middle. And I'l change Sue's leg too. Thank you so much for stopping by! Oz, you too, thanks! Hope this update is in the right direction.

03-28-2012, 10:41 AM	#23
thejaz180 The artist from Brooklyn Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Brooklyn, NY Posts: 2,509	I honestly luv them all, the ones with the corrections, I wanna show luv to pic A only ‘cause I’m a simple guy who likes shots that work out this way, but of course pic B is the cooler one of the two, but wait, it looks like you combined the two concepts in your final pic, the Hulk piece is cool too, awesome stuff, I’m digging it.