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Old 08-11-2011, 10:45 PM   #1
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Free Fallin' at High Noon

Had to do this to go along with Gobby, which I doodled a few weeks back...

Scratched this one out in a sketch books and threw some quick colors and inks on him for fun.

Hope ya guys dig!

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Very nice!
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This looks pretty damn fine. His thumb looks a little strange though and one foot is pointy toed and one is square toed. But the pose is cool
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Very nice!
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This looks pretty damn fine. His thumb looks a little strange though and one foot is pointy toed and one is square toed. But the pose is cool
Thanks for the comments! Yes, I see what you're saying about the thumb and the toes. All good points. I'll keep that in mind in future pieces. Thanks again!
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Old 08-14-2011, 04:48 AM   #6
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Yeah that hand is bizarre looking, but the overall dizzy, hazy feel of the image is very cool.
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Yeah that hand is bizarre looking, but the overall dizzy, hazy feel of the image is very cool.
Yeah, that hand is something to edit in the future. Thanks for the comments!
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Cool Spidey!

If I can offer some things I noticed about the colors and background:

the buildings at the bottom seem to be falling? Or the perspective is off- a little hard to tell. the color isn't really focusing on the Spidey. Seems a bit washed out over all. As though everything has the same opacity and darkness level. Maybe try separating Spider-man from the background slightly by making Spidey a bit more opaque and having the darks be darker from the background elements. You also have a blur on the bottom foot that suggests he's going up, yet he's falling towards the viewer.

Hope my two cents helps. Cool stuff overall.
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Cool Spidey!

If I can offer some things I noticed about the colors and background:

the buildings at the bottom seem to be falling? Or the perspective is off- a little hard to tell. the color isn't really focusing on the Spidey. Seems a bit washed out over all. As though everything has the same opacity and darkness level. Maybe try separating Spider-man from the background slightly by making Spidey a bit more opaque and having the darks be darker from the background elements. You also have a blur on the bottom foot that suggests he's going up, yet he's falling towards the viewer.

Hope my two cents helps. Cool stuff overall.
Very cool crit! All good points! Thanks!
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