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Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Jakarta,Indonesia
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Witchblade test page
Hey guys...first time thread here XD
Anyway this is a Witchblade test page I did. Sadly it didn't get through, didn't surprise me at all. It's all a learning experience for me and it encourage me more to get better in drawing. So please I need your help guys any kinds of comments and critique are most welcome. Page 1 ![]() Page 2 ![]() Page 3 ![]() thanks |
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Formally Known As Dismas
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: Madchester
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Really beautiful work!
Gav
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Join Date: Jun 2007
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Thanks Gav
I really appreciate it |
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The Killah Chinchillah
Join Date: Feb 2010
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Nice stuff, overall. My only critique would be that, for some reason, I'm not buying that the prison guard exists in this universe. Don't know why. Something about the way the shoulders and the arms relate to the rest of the body.
Other than that, solid!
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Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Jakarta,Indonesia
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thanks Supermonkey
![]() That's supposed to be Sara's partner. A 200 pounds polish woman. True. I need to practice more on drawing overweight people |
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Shrapnel collector...
Join Date: Mar 2004
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Nice pages! Really dig how you draw. You really make stuff look cool!
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Join Date: Jun 2007
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thanks man
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Easy Reader
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Amerika
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Very attractive artwork, but a lot of anatomy and perspective issues on it.
The girl that is sitting in the bench looks like Rob Liefeld drew her. |
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Join Date: Jun 2007
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Anatomy and perspective. I'll keep that in mind
Rob Liefeld? Well I have nothing against him...I think he's a great artist and thanks Scribbly |
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Gotta say I'm not crazy about the hand in the very last panel. There is no good reason for it to be out of the panel and bleeding off the page. It makes it look like it's tapping on the panel instead of the window.
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Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Jakarta,Indonesia
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Quote:
Anyway this is a Witchblade fanart I did, just for you guys
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Join Date: Jun 2011
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very clean style. It looks good.
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Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Jakarta,Indonesia
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thanks man
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