Witchblade test page

Takrezz · 07-24-2011, 01:09 PM

Hey guys...first time thread here XD
Anyway this is a Witchblade test page I did. Sadly it didn't get through, didn't surprise me at all. It's all a learning experience for me and it encourage me more to get better in drawing.
So please I need your help guys any kinds of comments and critique are most welcome.

Page 1

Page 2

Page 3

thanks

Gav Heryng · 07-24-2011, 02:03 PM

Really beautiful work!

Gav

Takrezz · 07-25-2011, 01:07 AM

Thanks Gav
I really appreciate it

SuperMonkey · 07-25-2011, 02:04 AM

Nice stuff, overall. My only critique would be that, for some reason, I'm not buying that the prison guard exists in this universe. Don't know why. Something about the way the shoulders and the arms relate to the rest of the body.

Other than that, solid!

Takrezz · 07-25-2011, 07:50 AM

thanks Supermonkey

That's supposed to be Sara's partner. A 200 pounds polish woman.
True. I need to practice more on drawing overweight people

kong · 07-25-2011, 04:43 PM

Nice pages! Really dig how you draw. You really make stuff look cool!

Takrezz · 07-26-2011, 02:38 AM

thanks man

Scribbly · 07-26-2011, 04:17 AM

Very attractive artwork, but a lot of anatomy and perspective issues on it.
The girl that is sitting in the bench looks like Rob Liefeld drew her.

Takrezz · 07-26-2011, 10:02 AM

Anatomy and perspective. I'll keep that in mind
Rob Liefeld? Well I have nothing against him...I think he's a great artist

and thanks Scribbly

Jeff LeBlanc · 07-26-2011, 10:54 AM

Gotta say I'm not crazy about the hand in the very last panel. There is no good reason for it to be out of the panel and bleeding off the page. It makes it look like it's tapping on the panel instead of the window.

Takrezz · 07-27-2011, 03:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jeff LeBlanc

Gotta say I'm not crazy about the hand in the very last panel. There is no good reason for it to be out of the panel and bleeding off the page. It makes it look like it's tapping on the panel instead of the window.

On second thought you're right. I did it because I just bored...want to try something new =P, I guess it didn't work. And thanks Jeff

Anyway this is a Witchblade fanart I did, just for you guys

JFKART · 07-28-2011, 10:58 PM

very clean style. It looks good.

Takrezz · 07-29-2011, 02:13 AM

thanks man

07-24-2011, 01:09 PM	#1
Takrezz Registered User Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Jakarta,Indonesia Posts: 26	Witchblade test page Hey guys...first time thread here XD Anyway this is a Witchblade test page I did. Sadly it didn't get through, didn't surprise me at all. It's all a learning experience for me and it encourage me more to get better in drawing. So please I need your help guys any kinds of comments and critique are most welcome. Page 1 Page 2 Page 3 thanks

07-24-2011, 02:03 PM	#2
Gav Heryng Formally Known As Dismas Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Madchester Posts: 3,589	Really beautiful work! Gav __________________ Follow me on Facebook! Follow me on Twitter! Follow me on Deviant Art! Follow me on MySpace!

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07-25-2011, 01:07 AM	#3
Takrezz Registered User Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Jakarta,Indonesia Posts: 26	Thanks Gav I really appreciate it

07-25-2011, 02:04 AM	#4
SuperMonkey The Killah Chinchillah Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Insert pithy witticism here Posts: 2,770	Nice stuff, overall. My only critique would be that, for some reason, I'm not buying that the prison guard exists in this universe. Don't know why. Something about the way the shoulders and the arms relate to the rest of the body. Other than that, solid!

07-25-2011, 07:50 AM	#5
Takrezz Registered User Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Jakarta,Indonesia Posts: 26	thanks Supermonkey That's supposed to be Sara's partner. A 200 pounds polish woman. True. I need to practice more on drawing overweight people

07-25-2011, 04:43 PM	#6
kong Shrapnel collector... Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 3,713	Nice pages! Really dig how you draw. You really make stuff look cool!

07-26-2011, 02:38 AM	#7
Takrezz Registered User Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Jakarta,Indonesia Posts: 26	thanks man

07-26-2011, 04:17 AM	#8
Scribbly Easy Reader Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Amerika Posts: 3,733	Very attractive artwork, but a lot of anatomy and perspective issues on it. The girl that is sitting in the bench looks like Rob Liefeld drew her.

07-26-2011, 10:02 AM	#9
Takrezz Registered User Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Jakarta,Indonesia Posts: 26	Anatomy and perspective. I'll keep that in mind Rob Liefeld? Well I have nothing against him...I think he's a great artist and thanks Scribbly

07-26-2011, 10:54 AM	#10
Jeff LeBlanc Registered User Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Montreal Posts: 85	Gotta say I'm not crazy about the hand in the very last panel. There is no good reason for it to be out of the panel and bleeding off the page. It makes it look like it's tapping on the panel instead of the window.

07-28-2011, 10:58 PM	#12
JFKART Registered User Join Date: Jun 2011 Posts: 55	very clean style. It looks good.

07-29-2011, 02:13 AM	#13
Takrezz Registered User Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Jakarta,Indonesia Posts: 26	thanks man