Space-Age Gun Girl

CWmax · 01-02-2011, 01:27 AM

Here is a sketch from today...

Let me know what you think.

Thanks,
CW

paul brian deberry · 01-02-2011, 10:04 AM

I like it! I betcha she would make for an interesting hero.

NaveenM · 01-02-2011, 03:36 PM

Nice. I'd like to see this inked.

GRIMSCRIBE · 01-02-2011, 05:55 PM

Think the pencils are superb, love the expression on her face.
Yeah, please get this ink. It's really super.
Ron

CWmax · 01-02-2011, 10:11 PM

Thanks Guys!

Here's some work on it - with added cosmic space friends...

CW

j giar · 01-03-2011, 05:55 PM

Slick, CW! Very slick.

GRIMSCRIBE · 01-04-2011, 09:27 PM

Please, get this inked and colored. Its just too freakin cool.
Ron

Eric Rabbitsmasher · 01-05-2011, 08:41 AM

Sweet!

gadgetwk · 01-05-2011, 04:02 PM

This is pretty cool. Let me give you some suggestions though, if you don't mind.

Everything looks pretty good except for her arms, hands, and the gun.

The gun looks like its twisted and really needs some more perspective work. the left half looks like its turned more towards her whereas the right half looks like its turned more away.

Her right arm (the one to the left of the pic) looks like it has no forearm. Looks like it just goes from the wrist to her bicep.

The fingers on her left hand look short and stubby.

Also, just noticed her ear is a bit small, and the chin and neck could use some work.

Otherwise, it looks really good. Really clean linework and the added in cosmic creatures are pretty cool. Give those things a bit of work and this will be a really great piece!

CWmax · 01-08-2011, 07:39 PM

Thanks for the crits. Here are some more touch-ups that might addres some of the issues.

CW

01-02-2011, 01:27 AM	#1
CWmax Random Access Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: A little town called none of your goddam business Posts: 775	Space-Age Gun Girl Here is a sketch from today... Let me know what you think. Thanks, CW

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01-02-2011, 10:04 AM	#2
paul brian deberry is a MASShole Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: just out of reach Posts: 2,285	I like it! I betcha she would make for an interesting hero.

01-02-2011, 03:36 PM	#3
NaveenM I should be writing. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Philly Posts: 906	Nice. I'd like to see this inked.

01-02-2011, 05:55 PM	#4
GRIMSCRIBE Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Fort Collins, CO Posts: 1,997	Think the pencils are superb, love the expression on her face. Yeah, please get this ink. It's really super. Ron

01-02-2011, 10:11 PM	#5
CWmax Random Access Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: A little town called none of your goddam business Posts: 775	Thanks Guys! Here's some work on it - with added cosmic space friends... CW

01-03-2011, 05:55 PM	#6
j giar Has nothing to add. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Elyria, Ohio Posts: 5,968	Slick, CW! Very slick.

01-04-2011, 09:27 PM	#7
GRIMSCRIBE Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Fort Collins, CO Posts: 1,997	Please, get this inked and colored. Its just too freakin cool. Ron

01-05-2011, 08:41 AM	#8
Eric Rabbitsmasher Call me Rabbit Fighter Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: The Ballrooms of Mars Posts: 1,678	Sweet!

01-05-2011, 04:02 PM	#9
gadgetwk Registered User Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 66	This is pretty cool. Let me give you some suggestions though, if you don't mind. Everything looks pretty good except for her arms, hands, and the gun. The gun looks like its twisted and really needs some more perspective work. the left half looks like its turned more towards her whereas the right half looks like its turned more away. Her right arm (the one to the left of the pic) looks like it has no forearm. Looks like it just goes from the wrist to her bicep. The fingers on her left hand look short and stubby. Also, just noticed her ear is a bit small, and the chin and neck could use some work. Otherwise, it looks really good. Really clean linework and the added in cosmic creatures are pretty cool. Give those things a bit of work and this will be a really great piece!

01-08-2011, 07:39 PM	#10
CWmax Random Access Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: A little town called none of your goddam business Posts: 775	Thanks for the crits. Here are some more touch-ups that might addres some of the issues. CW