Justice League

alexcat321 · 05-22-2010, 11:05 PM

Thanks. I'd appreciate some love. Please some love. Any type of love, tough and tender.

Jaywalk · 05-23-2010, 12:15 PM

The style is a bit cartoony but good.

Echaelon · 05-24-2010, 07:17 AM

Howdy,

Cool pages.

One thing I would becareful of is changing the panel/camera view between pannels of characters that are moving.

For example on Page 2 pannels 5 and 6 Superman is flying towards Darkside and is flying toward us but is giving the slight appearance of coming left to right. Then in the next pannel the camera angle is showing him hitting the ship from right to left. It slows down the momentum of Supes flying and can confusion as I first thought a beam was being fired from the ship.

This also happens on the last page on the last 2 pannels where we see them facing one way and then the angle changes and we are seeing them from the opposite side.

Great effort, keep it up.

alexcat321 · 05-25-2010, 09:22 PM

Thanks you guys, I really appreciate the comments and I'll be paying more attention to the camera angles. It's just that a lot of times I don't experiment with camera angles much and this time around I tried to spice it up with them. A lot of marvel artists use them well and I'll be incorporating them more into my work to get a better view on things..... no pun intended. I'll be looking forward to more comments if any. I really would appreciate some crits even, they're really looked to cause I need to get better.

05-22-2010, 11:05 PM	#1
alexcat321 Gettin' somewhere!!! Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: PA, United States Posts: 517	Justice League Thanks. I'd appreciate some love. Please some love. Any type of love, tough and tender.

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05-23-2010, 12:15 PM	#2
Jaywalk 40 y/o fanboy with wisdom Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Somewhere North Posts: 68	The style is a bit cartoony but good.

05-24-2010, 07:17 AM	#3
Echaelon Registered User Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 93	Howdy, Cool pages. One thing I would becareful of is changing the panel/camera view between pannels of characters that are moving. For example on Page 2 pannels 5 and 6 Superman is flying towards Darkside and is flying toward us but is giving the slight appearance of coming left to right. Then in the next pannel the camera angle is showing him hitting the ship from right to left. It slows down the momentum of Supes flying and can confusion as I first thought a beam was being fired from the ship. This also happens on the last page on the last 2 pannels where we see them facing one way and then the angle changes and we are seeing them from the opposite side. Great effort, keep it up.

05-25-2010, 09:22 PM	#4
alexcat321 Gettin' somewhere!!! Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: PA, United States Posts: 517	Thanks you guys, I really appreciate the comments and I'll be paying more attention to the camera angles. It's just that a lot of times I don't experiment with camera angles much and this time around I tried to spice it up with them. A lot of marvel artists use them well and I'll be incorporating them more into my work to get a better view on things..... no pun intended. I'll be looking forward to more comments if any. I really would appreciate some crits even, they're really looked to cause I need to get better.