DWPFF:Frankenstein

horror101 · 09-13-2009, 07:21 PM

A talented robotics engineer creates a body for his wife's preserved head. The reporters call him the Victor Frankenstein of our time. After lots of hard work the body is made the head is attached. The electrical impulses have been triggered her eyes open. SHe calls for her husband. He is so excited that she is ok. He helps her up holding her lovingly. She is disoriented. They start to dance. She smiles. SHe suddenly sees in place of her soft fingers are cold pieces of steal. Then she realizes she can't feel anything that's not her face. She looks down and see's a failed attempt of a womens body. She pushes him away screaming and crying what have u done to me? He explains that all he could save was her head and the body is the best he could do now but soon. She will have a more life like body. She crys out no. You've made me a monster! He say's u would have died other wise. She says I would have chosen death. SHe thrust her hands into computer controls. The volts and sparks fly. SHe falls to the flow smoking. The engineer goes to her side and colds her. She is dead. The end

chris stevens · 09-13-2009, 08:34 PM

your pitches are getting better.

i've got some material a little too close to this one already. but thanks!

horror101 · 09-13-2009, 09:57 PM

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Originally Posted by chris stevens

your pitches are getting better.

i've got some material a little too close to this one already. but thanks!

Thanks man. I'll keep trying I got a few more up my sleeve

chris stevens · 09-13-2009, 10:04 PM

happy to read them!

09-13-2009, 07:21 PM	#1
horror101 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 352	DWPFF:Frankenstein A talented robotics engineer creates a body for his wife's preserved head. The reporters call him the Victor Frankenstein of our time. After lots of hard work the body is made the head is attached. The electrical impulses have been triggered her eyes open. SHe calls for her husband. He is so excited that she is ok. He helps her up holding her lovingly. She is disoriented. They start to dance. She smiles. SHe suddenly sees in place of her soft fingers are cold pieces of steal. Then she realizes she can't feel anything that's not her face. She looks down and see's a failed attempt of a womens body. She pushes him away screaming and crying what have u done to me? He explains that all he could save was her head and the body is the best he could do now but soon. She will have a more life like body. She crys out no. You've made me a monster! He say's u would have died other wise. She says I would have chosen death. SHe thrust her hands into computer controls. The volts and sparks fly. SHe falls to the flow smoking. The engineer goes to her side and colds her. She is dead. The end

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09-13-2009, 08:34 PM	#2
chris stevens Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: philadelphia Posts: 2,396	your pitches are getting better. i've got some material a little too close to this one already. but thanks!

09-13-2009, 10:04 PM	#4
chris stevens Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: philadelphia Posts: 2,396	happy to read them!