My next project

Hanzou · 09-01-2009, 10:57 AM

I'm considering various outlets for this including Zuda. If they don't go for it, I'll continue the content in webcomic form on my website.

Anyways, take a look and drop me some feedback.

**L Jamal** · 09-01-2009, 03:35 PM

This doesn't seem to have your usual level of polish. The faces look unfinished in places and seem to change from panel to panel.

The color stuff looks much better than the grays, but even there the figures look stiff.

Hanzou · 09-02-2009, 01:12 AM

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Originally Posted by ljamal

This doesn't seem to have your usual level of polish. The faces look unfinished in places and seem to change from panel to panel.

The color stuff looks much better than the grays, but even there the figures look stiff.

Thanks for taking the time to comment man. I'm definitely going to re-work the first pages. I think I may have rushed through them too quickly.

09-01-2009, 10:57 AM	#1
Hanzou Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 915	My next project I'm considering various outlets for this including Zuda. If they don't go for it, I'll continue the content in webcomic form on my website. Anyways, take a look and drop me some feedback.

09-01-2009, 03:35 PM	#2
L Jamal member of G.R.O.S.S. Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: right here Posts: 10,572	This doesn't seem to have your usual level of polish. The faces look unfinished in places and seem to change from panel to panel. The color stuff looks much better than the grays, but even there the figures look stiff. __________________ L Jámal Walton UNGOODWISE \| MY BLOG \| SELF-PUBLISHING COMICS

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