Dinosaur vs Cowboy

CWmax · 08-10-2009, 12:21 AM

Here is a sketch I have been working on...

Let me know what you think...

Thanks,
CW

CWmax · 08-12-2009, 06:22 PM

neat

Lord Fejj · 08-12-2009, 08:23 PM

Looks good, I'm not sure about horse anatomy but I think it might look better if you streched his neck out, he'd look like he was racing for his life instead of prancing along. Maybe take his head out of profile and put into 3/4 like the body.

ink4884 · 08-12-2009, 08:27 PM

loving the concept but maybe you trying pushing the shilloutes of the three main characters so it reads better right away. Just slight tweaks but looking good!

ArmstrongArts · 08-13-2009, 04:45 AM

Man i was so disappointed. I thought it was gonna be Dinos eating the Dallas Cowboys. Oh well.

You might want to darken in the line work so the haze effect on the bottom is more dramatic. That will give the piece a more finished feel. also the dino's tail seems a bit low for the position he is in. The rendering looks good, just maybe not enough of it and not dark enough

walterostlie · 08-13-2009, 07:58 AM

The dino looks pretty cool. The cowboy's face looks kind of odd, maybe it looks like he has no nose. I think his gun is at the wrong angle for his hand.

GRIMSCRIBE · 08-13-2009, 08:30 PM

Excellent drawing here, showing lots of interest. Good for you. Horse's head needs to be repositioned, it wouldn't be tucked in like that, no at a full out gallop. Still, this is really impressive. Keep at it.
Ron

CWmax · 08-17-2009, 04:48 PM

Here is a bit of work on it....I will definately reposition the horse's head if I redraw it.

Thanks for all of your input - Your comments mean a lot to me and I really appreciate your time.

Best Regards,
CW

08-10-2009, 12:21 AM	#1
CWmax Random Access Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: A little town called none of your goddam business Posts: 775	Dinosaur vs Cowboy Here is a sketch I have been working on... Let me know what you think... Thanks, CW

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08-12-2009, 06:22 PM	#2
CWmax Random Access Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: A little town called none of your goddam business Posts: 775	neat

08-12-2009, 08:23 PM	#3
Lord Fejj Be water my friend... Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The Tang Dynasty Posts: 1,559	Looks good, I'm not sure about horse anatomy but I think it might look better if you streched his neck out, he'd look like he was racing for his life instead of prancing along. Maybe take his head out of profile and put into 3/4 like the body.

08-12-2009, 08:27 PM	#4
ink4884 ...~_~... Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: califorina Posts: 414	loving the concept but maybe you trying pushing the shilloutes of the three main characters so it reads better right away. Just slight tweaks but looking good!

08-13-2009, 04:45 AM	#5
ArmstrongArts Registered User Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 36	Man i was so disappointed. I thought it was gonna be Dinos eating the Dallas Cowboys. Oh well. You might want to darken in the line work so the haze effect on the bottom is more dramatic. That will give the piece a more finished feel. also the dino's tail seems a bit low for the position he is in. The rendering looks good, just maybe not enough of it and not dark enough

08-13-2009, 07:58 AM	#6
walterostlie Registered User Join Date: May 2009 Location: Florida Posts: 116	The dino looks pretty cool. The cowboy's face looks kind of odd, maybe it looks like he has no nose. I think his gun is at the wrong angle for his hand.

08-13-2009, 08:30 PM	#7
GRIMSCRIBE Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Fort Collins, CO Posts: 1,997	Excellent drawing here, showing lots of interest. Good for you. Horse's head needs to be repositioned, it wouldn't be tucked in like that, no at a full out gallop. Still, this is really impressive. Keep at it. Ron

08-17-2009, 04:48 PM	#8
CWmax Random Access Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: A little town called none of your goddam business Posts: 775	Here is a bit of work on it....I will definately reposition the horse's head if I redraw it. Thanks for all of your input - Your comments mean a lot to me and I really appreciate your time. Best Regards, CW