Wasp & Ivy

Red20 · 07-29-2009, 10:24 AM

Currently colouring Ivy...
Tree's look a million times better painted! (Man I gotta work on that s'more!) LOL
Enjoy!

thunder5x · 07-29-2009, 10:30 AM

Wasp's head and wings are way to small. The trees need a light source.

marvel1 · 07-29-2009, 11:51 AM

I likes my women THICK!! LOL
Great work!

sevans · 07-29-2009, 04:50 PM

This is a comic forum. You can't have a fuller figured lady on here.

What the hell are you thinking!

Anyway, I like the Wasp pic but have to agree her wings look too small. Plus her right arm (the snapping one) is alot shorter than her left. And I think a hint of her back lower leg/foot would look better.

Miguel Marques · 07-29-2009, 05:15 PM

j giar · 07-29-2009, 05:23 PM

Couple of things, Red...
Love the Ivy piece and yeah trees always look like crap until you start adding textures, or in your case colors, to give them shape. Looking forward to seeing that colored.
Wasp has some anatomy issues with her arms/ shoulder areas and her lower back. Her arms are definitely short. Even with the fullsize figure. If you follow the curved arc of the elbow to hip area you'll see what I mean. Also her lower back area on her right side (our right) I'd thin out a bit more. Her torso may be to long..but if you were to adjust the arm length that may fix itself. And by the way, great job on the facial expressions. J.

galmando · 07-30-2009, 07:14 AM

i like the poison ivy, everything sits right with that

i'm not sure about the Wasp though

i appreciated what you're trying to do with regards to fuller figured women, but here it honestly looks to me as though she hais going through a sex change and becoming a man.

her body just doesnt look femenine, and fuller figured girls certainly do have femeninity (ask my girlfriend! god i'm glad she doesnt come on here)

i think it might be that her head just looks too small, and her face looks as though it belongs to a slimmer body, if she really had a body like that it would show in here face i think. maybe chunk up the features or curve out the body? dunno.

i lvoe the expression tho!

horror101 · 07-30-2009, 09:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Red20

Currently colouring Ivy...
Tree's look a million times better painted! (Man I gotta work on that s'more!) LOL
Enjoy!

Man that is alot of Ass to spank with Wasp. Ya something seems a little off can't put my finger on it?

And Ivy thats just the right amount of ass to spank. LOL!

WOLVIE · 07-30-2009, 07:29 PM

your tree looks like a 2 year old drew it. You should spend a little more time on your backgrounds. also, those heroines need to loose some weight.

Red20 · 07-30-2009, 10:37 PM

Thanks for taking a look guys!

As for comments regarding a >Characters< weight, don't bother with them because I find that they look fine the way they are and if you don't think so, don't bother commenting on my art again. thanks

Progress on Ivy and an upcoming Hulk

enjoy!

sevans · 07-30-2009, 10:50 PM

The vine that Ivy is sitting on isn't taunt, there's no weight on it.

Since she doesn't float, you need to tweak it.

The Hulk looks pretty good, but maybe abit too small. He's almost regular (for a bodybuilder) size.

07-29-2009, 10:24 AM	#1
Red20 This Space For Rent! Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Toronto Canada Posts: 208	Wasp & Ivy Currently colouring Ivy... Tree's look a million times better painted! (Man I gotta work on that s'more!) LOL Enjoy!

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07-29-2009, 10:30 AM	#2
thunder5x chaos warrior Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Clearwater,FL Posts: 174	Wasp's head and wings are way to small. The trees need a light source.

07-29-2009, 11:51 AM	#3
marvel1 M.A.C Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: new york Posts: 700	I likes my women THICK!! LOL Great work!

07-29-2009, 04:50 PM	#4
sevans www.sevans.co.nz Join Date: May 2004 Location: behind you ...... MotherF**KER! Posts: 4,525	This is a comic forum. You can't have a fuller figured lady on here. What the hell are you thinking! Anyway, I like the Wasp pic but have to agree her wings look too small. Plus her right arm (the snapping one) is alot shorter than her left. And I think a hint of her back lower leg/foot would look better.

07-29-2009, 05:15 PM	#5
Miguel Marques Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Brasil Posts: 2,068

07-29-2009, 05:23 PM	#6
j giar Has nothing to add. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Elyria, Ohio Posts: 5,968	Couple of things, Red... Love the Ivy piece and yeah trees always look like crap until you start adding textures, or in your case colors, to give them shape. Looking forward to seeing that colored. Wasp has some anatomy issues with her arms/ shoulder areas and her lower back. Her arms are definitely short. Even with the fullsize figure. If you follow the curved arc of the elbow to hip area you'll see what I mean. Also her lower back area on her right side (our right) I'd thin out a bit more. Her torso may be to long..but if you were to adjust the arm length that may fix itself. And by the way, great job on the facial expressions. J.

07-30-2009, 07:14 AM	#7
galmando backwards it's odnamlag Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: I live in Sunny Manchester, UK!! Posts: 1,962	i like the poison ivy, everything sits right with that i'm not sure about the Wasp though i appreciated what you're trying to do with regards to fuller figured women, but here it honestly looks to me as though she hais going through a sex change and becoming a man. her body just doesnt look femenine, and fuller figured girls certainly do have femeninity (ask my girlfriend! god i'm glad she doesnt come on here) i think it might be that her head just looks too small, and her face looks as though it belongs to a slimmer body, if she really had a body like that it would show in here face i think. maybe chunk up the features or curve out the body? dunno. i lvoe the expression tho!

07-30-2009, 07:29 PM	#9
WOLVIE Registered User Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: NC Posts: 470	your tree looks like a 2 year old drew it. You should spend a little more time on your backgrounds. also, those heroines need to loose some weight.

07-30-2009, 10:37 PM	#10
Red20 This Space For Rent! Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Toronto Canada Posts: 208	Thanks for taking a look guys! As for comments regarding a >Characters< weight, don't bother with them because I find that they look fine the way they are and if you don't think so, don't bother commenting on my art again. thanks Progress on Ivy and an upcoming Hulk enjoy!

07-30-2009, 10:50 PM	#11
sevans www.sevans.co.nz Join Date: May 2004 Location: behind you ...... MotherF**KER! Posts: 4,525	The vine that Ivy is sitting on isn't taunt, there's no weight on it. Since she doesn't float, you need to tweak it. The Hulk looks pretty good, but maybe abit too small. He's almost regular (for a bodybuilder) size.