Lightstorm from R and R Comics

cbear · 07-26-2009, 11:53 PM

Hi, everyone.

Here are the pencils for my first installment of R and R Comics' Lightstorm.

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Be sure and check out the site for what has gone before in the Lightstorm saga by Jamie Cottle and Erik Roman. Also, take a look at the other webcomics from R and R.

http://www.randrcomics.com/

Chuck George

Lord Fejj · 07-28-2009, 12:54 PM

I dig this! Has a great old school Marvel feel to it.

Erik Roman · 07-28-2009, 01:29 PM

Great!

I LOVE what you did with the characters and think it's better than the first 8 pages I did.

Were I doing this page, however, I would have pulled back on the second panel and showed more of the environment so you know where you're at.

VERY cool.

~e.

j giar · 07-28-2009, 04:19 PM

Real nice. Looks like early Buscema. And I agree with Erik about that second panel. Need a sense of space or location to anchor everything in. J.

cbear · 07-28-2009, 04:55 PM

Thanks, guys. Erik, I'm especially glad you like what I've done! I agree that the establishing shot shot have been opened up a lot more.

Chuck

cbear · 08-11-2009, 01:03 AM

Here's the next page:

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Chuck

Erik Roman · 08-11-2009, 06:04 AM

Sweet!

Lightstorm is in great hands.

Your character designs are so old school marvel. A perfect look for the strip.

Keep on keepin' on!

~e.

Nick Pitarra · 08-11-2009, 07:53 AM

I agree here, some sweet classic looking stuff. I reallg dig it. My only gripe is that I can't figure out where the head is on the kneeling girl in panel 2 of page 1...don't know if it's behind the book thing she's holding, if she has a weird shape head/neck/if her head is leaning down, or if you drew it wrong....it's driving me crazy

. Keep up the great work man!

~nick

cbear · 08-11-2009, 12:43 PM

Nick
She is leaning her head down. Sort of a difficult angle that maybe I didn't quite pull off

Chuck

07-26-2009, 11:53 PM	#1
cbear Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 38	Lightstorm from R and R Comics Hi, everyone. Here are the pencils for my first installment of R and R Comics' Lightstorm. [IMG][/IMG] Be sure and check out the site for what has gone before in the Lightstorm saga by Jamie Cottle and Erik Roman. Also, take a look at the other webcomics from R and R. http://www.randrcomics.com/ Chuck George

07-28-2009, 01:29 PM	#3
Erik Roman takes commission work! Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Kalamazoo. No, really! Posts: 411	Great! I LOVE what you did with the characters and think it's better than the first 8 pages I did. Were I doing this page, however, I would have pulled back on the second panel and showed more of the environment so you know where you're at. VERY cool. ~e. __________________ Erik! I take character art commissions at reasonable rates. My full portfolio Gods don't kill people, people with gods kill people.

08-11-2009, 01:03 AM	#6
cbear Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 38	Here's the next page: [IMG][/IMG] Chuck

08-11-2009, 06:04 AM	#7
Erik Roman takes commission work! Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Kalamazoo. No, really! Posts: 411	Sweet! Lightstorm is in great hands. Your character designs are so old school marvel. A perfect look for the strip. Keep on keepin' on! ~e. __________________ Erik! I take character art commissions at reasonable rates. My full portfolio Gods don't kill people, people with gods kill people.

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07-28-2009, 12:54 PM	#2
Lord Fejj Be water my friend... Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The Tang Dynasty Posts: 1,561	I dig this! Has a great old school Marvel feel to it.

07-28-2009, 04:19 PM	#4
j giar Has nothing to add. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Elyria, Ohio Posts: 5,968	Real nice. Looks like early Buscema. And I agree with Erik about that second panel. Need a sense of space or location to anchor everything in. J.

07-28-2009, 04:55 PM	#5
cbear Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 38	Thanks, guys. Erik, I'm especially glad you like what I've done! I agree that the establishing shot shot have been opened up a lot more. Chuck

08-11-2009, 07:53 AM	#8
Nick Pitarra Illustrator Extraordinair Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: TEXAS-The Best Damn Country in the United States Posts: 1,277	I agree here, some sweet classic looking stuff. I reallg dig it. My only gripe is that I can't figure out where the head is on the kneeling girl in panel 2 of page 1...don't know if it's behind the book thing she's holding, if she has a weird shape head/neck/if her head is leaning down, or if you drew it wrong....it's driving me crazy . Keep up the great work man! ~nick

08-11-2009, 12:43 PM	#9
cbear Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 38	Nick She is leaning her head down. Sort of a difficult angle that maybe I didn't quite pull off Chuck