Fear Agent

MaHeRo · 05-10-2009, 02:41 AM

Line art by Tony Moore. Crits and comments welcomed.

MBirkhofer · 05-10-2009, 10:16 AM

Nice job!

ArchonComics · 05-10-2009, 01:14 PM

Too much red. J/k. Very nice job.

Miguel Marques · 05-10-2009, 06:37 PM

MaHeRo · 05-11-2009, 09:12 PM

Hey, thanks all, I appreciate it.

carriertone · 05-17-2009, 05:04 AM

I haven't been on here in a while, but I'm glad I came back! Really nice MaHeRo! I really like the way you rendered the tentacles, and your use of color is fantastic! Great lighting and shadowing too! Mike Colbert (Digital Webbing's Crazy Mary) and I are looking for a colorist for a cover, and if we find anyone even half as good as this, we'll be happy!

- Carl

SeanE · 05-17-2009, 05:37 AM

I'm not a fan of the see- through bubble helmet. It looks more like a halo than a goldfish bowl on his head.

maybe make the center more transparent and put a couple of light glaroes on top of his face/head in front of the lineart

like this --> http://www.seanellery.com/gallery/al.../fearagent.jpg

cheers
Sean

MaHeRo · 05-17-2009, 10:30 AM

@carriertone

Thanks Carl.

@SeanE

You're right, I received the same crits on other sites and made a correction to the helmet, just neglected to repost it here.

05-10-2009, 02:41 AM	#1
MaHeRo Mark H Roberts Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Alexandria, VA Posts: 186	Fear Agent Line art by Tony Moore. Crits and comments welcomed.

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05-10-2009, 10:16 AM	#2
MBirkhofer Decks, drums, tablets. Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 1,117	Nice job!

05-10-2009, 01:14 PM	#3
ArchonComics Registered User Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 138	Too much red. J/k. Very nice job.

05-10-2009, 06:37 PM	#4
Miguel Marques Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Brasil Posts: 2,071

05-11-2009, 09:12 PM	#5
MaHeRo Mark H Roberts Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Alexandria, VA Posts: 186	Hey, thanks all, I appreciate it.

05-17-2009, 05:04 AM	#6
carriertone Carl Jansson Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: In the hearts of millions. Posts: 520	I haven't been on here in a while, but I'm glad I came back! Really nice MaHeRo! I really like the way you rendered the tentacles, and your use of color is fantastic! Great lighting and shadowing too! Mike Colbert (Digital Webbing's Crazy Mary) and I are looking for a colorist for a cover, and if we find anyone even half as good as this, we'll be happy! - Carl

05-17-2009, 05:37 AM	#7
SeanE Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Perth Western Australia Posts: 1,058	I'm not a fan of the see- through bubble helmet. It looks more like a halo than a goldfish bowl on his head. maybe make the center more transparent and put a couple of light glaroes on top of his face/head in front of the lineart like this --> http://www.seanellery.com/gallery/al.../fearagent.jpg cheers Sean

05-17-2009, 10:30 AM	#8
MaHeRo Mark H Roberts Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Alexandria, VA Posts: 186	@carriertone Thanks Carl. @SeanE You're right, I received the same crits on other sites and made a correction to the helmet, just neglected to repost it here.