The Real Way To Put Out A Cigar.....

TACTICS1 · 03-25-2009, 05:46 PM

Don't have an ashtray?? Then use somebody's face....

Page 25 from my Pinpoint comic book..

Pencils by Edson Alves.... I love this page...
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Bluepencil · 03-26-2009, 08:47 AM

Very awesome drawing, nice expressions on people face in the mirror.

kingbyron · 03-26-2009, 11:39 AM

all i can think of saying is ouch.
cool pic, would like to see the inked version to get a better sense of all the blacks.

byron
my COMICSPACE
my daily zombie

down21 · 03-26-2009, 12:05 PM

Yeah, great page. It'd be cool to see more if you get the chance to put them up.

TACTICS1 · 03-26-2009, 05:35 PM

Thank you for the comments...

here is a page from two pages up when Pinpoint walks in the bar...
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TACTICS1 · 03-26-2009, 05:42 PM

Pinpoint..
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Bluepencil · 03-27-2009, 08:52 AM

Holy crap, nice details on guns!!

deanne · 03-27-2009, 09:56 AM

he's skeery looking.

Grande · 03-27-2009, 11:06 AM

Wow, Alfred! Edson is doing an amazing job!!

TACTICS1 · 03-27-2009, 06:29 PM

Thank you for the comments....

J.C. it was not easy to fill your shoes my friend....

I lucky Edson came to the rescue...

But again, I happy to follow you on your hot new title...

OZ! · 03-28-2009, 12:16 AM

Pretty cool. Just a few quick crits. According to the established panels your main character no longer has a vest on, the mirror is coming off past the wall(there were bottles passed it in the establishing shots), and the barkeep has become swollen and pot bellied. The sequentials look great but there is a lot to be wanted from the splash page, especially with what lead up to it. Maybe your artist will be ok with sitting down and making the adjustments to create a stronger piece for you. Either way, its looking pretty good. Good luck.

TACTICS1 · 03-30-2009, 11:25 AM

Thank you for the comments OZ..

I'm glad you like the page, and thank you for bringing out some things I can do to make it stronger....

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TACTICS1 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 177	The Real Way To Put Out A Cigar..... Don't have an ashtray?? Then use somebody's face.... Page 25 from my Pinpoint comic book.. Pencils by Edson Alves.... I love this page... [IMG][/IMG]

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03-26-2009, 08:47 AM	#2
Bluepencil Random Artist Join Date: May 2008 Location: Lansing, Michigan Posts: 127	Very awesome drawing, nice expressions on people face in the mirror.

03-26-2009, 11:39 AM	#3
kingbyron extracrispy Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: the temple of the dog Posts: 190	all i can think of saying is ouch. cool pic, would like to see the inked version to get a better sense of all the blacks. byron my COMICSPACE my daily zombie

03-26-2009, 12:05 PM	#4
down21 Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 590	Yeah, great page. It'd be cool to see more if you get the chance to put them up.

03-27-2009, 08:52 AM	#7
Bluepencil Random Artist Join Date: May 2008 Location: Lansing, Michigan Posts: 127	Holy crap, nice details on guns!!

03-27-2009, 11:06 AM	#9
Grande jcgrande.blogspot.com Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 286	Wow, Alfred! Edson is doing an amazing job!!

03-27-2009, 06:29 PM	#10
TACTICS1 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 177	Thank you for the comments.... J.C. it was not easy to fill your shoes my friend.... I lucky Edson came to the rescue... But again, I happy to follow you on your hot new title...

03-28-2009, 12:16 AM	#11
OZ! All Powerful Wizard Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Texas Posts: 4,499	Pretty cool. Just a few quick crits. According to the established panels your main character no longer has a vest on, the mirror is coming off past the wall(there were bottles passed it in the establishing shots), and the barkeep has become swollen and pot bellied. The sequentials look great but there is a lot to be wanted from the splash page, especially with what lead up to it. Maybe your artist will be ok with sitting down and making the adjustments to create a stronger piece for you. Either way, its looking pretty good. Good luck.

03-30-2009, 11:25 AM	#12
TACTICS1 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 177	Thank you for the comments OZ.. I'm glad you like the page, and thank you for bringing out some things I can do to make it stronger....