Swamp thing vs Man Thing

galmando · 03-19-2009, 05:43 PM

Or Man Thing about to get pummeled.. or is he?

For the draw off, but which one shall i use!! decisions decisions!

crit away are very welcome!

OR

Thanks For Looking!!

Gal

Random Chance · 03-19-2009, 06:50 PM

The Black and white version is far stronger.

Nice posing really nice composition, I'm not sure about swamp things head and chest. I think his head is to small and his chest mussels don't quite match up with his rotation and shoulders.

I do however think this is a very cool image.

Gav Heryng · 03-19-2009, 08:25 PM

You got lazy on the background, bud. The roughness of those trees detracts from the sharp inking on the figures, which look pretty great to me. It's still good, but I reckon you could make the trees flat black and add some more branches at the top. Maybe. Might get a bit crowded. Nice inking on the water!!

Gav

galmando · 03-20-2009, 06:02 AM

i was thinking of flat black on the trees, but i was running low on ink!!!

think i got some cartridges somewhere though, we got quite a few with those brush pens didnt we?

Gav Heryng · 03-20-2009, 07:00 AM

Yeah, got one cartridge with it and a pack of 3 or 4 replacements.

Gav

the_beast · 03-20-2009, 01:14 PM

Nice Stuff

I Like The Black And White One

This Is A Cool Draw-Off

03-19-2009, 05:43 PM	#1
galmando backwards it's odnamlag Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: I live in Sunny Manchester, UK!! Posts: 1,962	Swamp thing vs Man Thing Or Man Thing about to get pummeled.. or is he? For the draw off, but which one shall i use!! decisions decisions! crit away are very welcome! OR Thanks For Looking!! Gal

03-19-2009, 08:25 PM	#3
Gav Heryng Formally Known As Dismas Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Madchester Posts: 3,589	You got lazy on the background, bud. The roughness of those trees detracts from the sharp inking on the figures, which look pretty great to me. It's still good, but I reckon you could make the trees flat black and add some more branches at the top. Maybe. Might get a bit crowded. Nice inking on the water!! Gav __________________ Follow me on Facebook! Follow me on Twitter! Follow me on Deviant Art! Follow me on MySpace!

03-20-2009, 07:00 AM	#5
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03-19-2009, 06:50 PM	#2
Random Chance Registered User Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: London Posts: 302	The Black and white version is far stronger. Nice posing really nice composition, I'm not sure about swamp things head and chest. I think his head is to small and his chest mussels don't quite match up with his rotation and shoulders. I do however think this is a very cool image.

03-20-2009, 06:02 AM	#4
galmando backwards it's odnamlag Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: I live in Sunny Manchester, UK!! Posts: 1,962	i was thinking of flat black on the trees, but i was running low on ink!!! think i got some cartridges somewhere though, we got quite a few with those brush pens didnt we?

03-20-2009, 01:14 PM	#6
the_beast Devil's Advocate Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: In Your Head Posts: 76	Nice Stuff I Like The Black And White One This Is A Cool Draw-Off