Psylocke

jar · 03-16-2009, 05:29 PM

Another one before bed! Enjoy!

Rob Norton · 03-16-2009, 10:39 PM

i love your rendering. it looks all energetic and cool ...

but the underlying drawing is looking off. the arm is looking way short, especially when looking at the size comparision of her arm and her head, which looks to big as well. and her torso looks squashed.

i would just suggest working out a few particulars it terms of the underlying drawing before finishing them up. but dont get me wrong, i love your art.

rob
12013

DarkKni9hT · 03-17-2009, 03:51 AM

^+1^
Completely agree. Also her right shoulder belongs on a man. Even muscled up, the female shoulder is more rounded with shallower cuts.

Super rendering. That's always been your forte.

jar · 03-17-2009, 08:15 AM

Hey thanks so much guys!

Really appreciate the crits!

down21 · 03-17-2009, 08:49 AM

I like what would probably be a heavy use of blacks and she has really strong features which is cool.

03-16-2009, 05:29 PM	#1
jar www.jonathanrector.com Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Toronto CANADA Posts: 472	Psylocke Another one before bed! Enjoy!

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03-16-2009, 10:39 PM	#2
Rob Norton apprentice of the pencil Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: utah Posts: 2,750	i love your rendering. it looks all energetic and cool ... but the underlying drawing is looking off. the arm is looking way short, especially when looking at the size comparision of her arm and her head, which looks to big as well. and her torso looks squashed. i would just suggest working out a few particulars it terms of the underlying drawing before finishing them up. but dont get me wrong, i love your art. rob 12013

03-17-2009, 03:51 AM	#3
DarkKni9hT Th'Ink Tank Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Montreal, QC Posts: 1,598	^+1^ Completely agree. Also her right shoulder belongs on a man. Even muscled up, the female shoulder is more rounded with shallower cuts. Super rendering. That's always been your forte.

03-17-2009, 08:15 AM	#4
jar www.jonathanrector.com Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Toronto CANADA Posts: 472	Hey thanks so much guys! Really appreciate the crits!

03-17-2009, 08:49 AM	#5
down21 Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 590	I like what would probably be a heavy use of blacks and she has really strong features which is cool.