10th Muse 2nd cover....

web-head · 11-28-2008, 06:07 AM

This is the second pinup of three for the new 10th Muse comic series coming soon.

I went a bit darker with the pencils on this one to help on the colouring process and quite liked the results.

I'll post the colours here too when i get them

1st pinup pencils....
http://web-head-uk.deviantart.com/ar...over-101913136

1st pinup colours....
http://web-head-uk.deviantart.com/ar...ours-103456543

http://web-head-uk.deviantart.com/ar...ours-102812657

Deviantart site... http://web-head-uk.deviantart.com/

Cyclone Ranger · 11-28-2008, 06:49 AM

Very nice work and incredibly clean lines. The only crit is I think she's not quite sitting correctly her right buttock ( right from her perspective not right as we look at the page ) should be a little lower. Her pelvis looks a little thin otherwise. Really super stuff and great background.

web-head · 11-28-2008, 06:53 AM

thanks, man.. glad you like it and cheers for the crit

HIEROPHANTOM · 11-28-2008, 07:33 AM

This is a cool piece, lots of very nice detail.

Impressive

Pb

web-head · 11-28-2008, 07:58 AM

thanks!!!

knockedoutpanzer · 11-28-2008, 08:05 AM

I can't tell if anything's wrong with her backside, and I've been staring at it for an hour now...

Seriously good stuff. I like the sci-fi look, and though I no little of the Muse (isn't she an Egyptian Goddess? could be wrong) anyway, I would grab this off the shelf.

web-head · 11-28-2008, 11:00 AM

thanks, knockedoutpanzer! If you've been staring at it for that long I've more than achieved my goal hehe

Yea, this is based on the original series by Image but set 800 years in the future (hence the si-fi feel)

thanks for lookin

Rob Norton · 11-28-2008, 05:06 PM

i agree that her right hip is disjointed and/or not placed right, but it really stood out to me. everything else looks slick and kick ass.

rob

Saul Haber · 11-29-2008, 06:32 PM

This looks really good to me. Even better than your first pinu-up.

PS- I actually just noticed that she has ripped clothing, which looks kind of weird and out of place to me, since she looks to be in pretty good condition otherwise and the whole scene is rather serene. What's up with that?

web-head · 12-01-2008, 08:31 AM

thanks for the comments guys! On the clothes; I was kinda going for a battle worn look to add a littel detail to the figure. If you look at her knees and arm I'v added in lots of little scratches and dents to try and get that across.

thanks again

WH

Saul Haber · 12-01-2008, 07:10 PM

Well, I get that it's supposed to look battle worn, but that doesn't seem to fit the rest of the piece. She doesn't seem like she just came from battle or like she even could (do battle). She seems very relaxed and happy. Maybe a little playful. I think the tears in her clothing will just be distracting (especially when colored) and I don't feel they'll add anything. They'll make her look homeless rather than battle worn. Just my opinion...

marcom · 12-01-2008, 07:43 PM

reat stuff and those backgrounds are fantastic!

Gilby · 12-02-2008, 09:03 AM

Fantastic pic and I have to agree about the backgrounds--great stuff!

web-head · 12-02-2008, 09:20 AM

Saul Haber
hmmmmmm maybe she's revelling in victory after a hard fought battle and looking out over the land to which she’s defended, about to celebrate…. Or maybe this is just thinking in to things a little to much hehe

seriously tho… cheers for the crits/ comments.

marcom
thanks, man! glad you dig the background... I love putting thought and detail in to these!

Gilby
Cheers, Gilby!! glad you're liking the art

11-28-2008, 06:07 AM	#1
web-head Registered User Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 70	10th Muse 2nd cover.... This is the second pinup of three for the new 10th Muse comic series coming soon. I went a bit darker with the pencils on this one to help on the colouring process and quite liked the results. I'll post the colours here too when i get them 1st pinup pencils.... http://web-head-uk.deviantart.com/ar...over-101913136 1st pinup colours.... http://web-head-uk.deviantart.com/ar...ours-103456543 http://web-head-uk.deviantart.com/ar...ours-102812657 Deviantart site... http://web-head-uk.deviantart.com/

11-28-2008, 08:05 AM	#6
knockedoutpanzer Hails Cthulhu! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: england Posts: 970	I can't tell if anything's wrong with her backside, and I've been staring at it for an hour now... Seriously good stuff. I like the sci-fi look, and though I no little of the Muse (isn't she an Egyptian Goddess? could be wrong) anyway, I would grab this off the shelf. Last edited by knockedoutpanzer; 11-28-2008 at 08:06 AM. Reason: bah humbug!

12-01-2008, 08:31 AM	#10
web-head Registered User Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 70	thanks for the comments guys! On the clothes; I was kinda going for a battle worn look to add a littel detail to the figure. If you look at her knees and arm I'v added in lots of little scratches and dents to try and get that across. thanks again WH Last edited by web-head; 12-02-2008 at 04:34 AM.

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11-28-2008, 06:49 AM	#2
Cyclone Ranger Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 97	Very nice work and incredibly clean lines. The only crit is I think she's not quite sitting correctly her right buttock ( right from her perspective not right as we look at the page ) should be a little lower. Her pelvis looks a little thin otherwise. Really super stuff and great background.

11-28-2008, 06:53 AM	#3
web-head Registered User Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 70	thanks, man.. glad you like it and cheers for the crit

11-28-2008, 07:33 AM	#4
HIEROPHANTOM Registered User Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Perth, Australia Posts: 192	This is a cool piece, lots of very nice detail. Impressive Pb

11-28-2008, 07:58 AM	#5
web-head Registered User Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 70	thanks!!!

11-28-2008, 11:00 AM	#7
web-head Registered User Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 70	thanks, knockedoutpanzer! If you've been staring at it for that long I've more than achieved my goal hehe Yea, this is based on the original series by Image but set 800 years in the future (hence the si-fi feel) thanks for lookin

11-28-2008, 05:06 PM	#8
Rob Norton apprentice of the pencil Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: utah Posts: 2,750	i agree that her right hip is disjointed and/or not placed right, but it really stood out to me. everything else looks slick and kick ass. rob

11-29-2008, 06:32 PM	#9
Saul Haber Registered User Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,581	This looks really good to me. Even better than your first pinu-up. PS- I actually just noticed that she has ripped clothing, which looks kind of weird and out of place to me, since she looks to be in pretty good condition otherwise and the whole scene is rather serene. What's up with that?

12-01-2008, 07:10 PM	#11
Saul Haber Registered User Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,581	Well, I get that it's supposed to look battle worn, but that doesn't seem to fit the rest of the piece. She doesn't seem like she just came from battle or like she even could (do battle). She seems very relaxed and happy. Maybe a little playful. I think the tears in her clothing will just be distracting (especially when colored) and I don't feel they'll add anything. They'll make her look homeless rather than battle worn. Just my opinion...

12-01-2008, 07:43 PM	#12
marcom Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 128	reat stuff and those backgrounds are fantastic!

12-02-2008, 09:03 AM	#13
Gilby Writer/Creator Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: The Jinjurverse Posts: 316	Fantastic pic and I have to agree about the backgrounds--great stuff!

12-02-2008, 09:20 AM	#14
web-head Registered User Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 70	Saul Haber hmmmmmm maybe she's revelling in victory after a hard fought battle and looking out over the land to which she’s defended, about to celebrate…. Or maybe this is just thinking in to things a little to much hehe seriously tho… cheers for the crits/ comments. marcom thanks, man! glad you dig the background... I love putting thought and detail in to these! Gilby Cheers, Gilby!! glad you're liking the art