Full scene from Noir style antihero comic (new 3rd page added). crits wanted.

Eggbert · 08-09-2008, 08:08 AM

This is a full scene from the first issue of the series I'm drawing. Its not the first scene, but does establish these important characters. The third page hasn't been posted here before. I am putting the whole scene (reposting first two pages) in so you can get a better sense of where it's going. I received some helpful criticism for the pages I already posted which I have tried to take into account for the third page. Such as adding a little more detail and texture and trying to use blacks to frame it. Please let me know what you think about ANY aspect of it.

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08-09-2008, 08:08 AM	#1
Eggbert Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: London Posts: 50	Full scene from Noir style antihero comic (new 3rd page added). crits wanted. This is a full scene from the first issue of the series I'm drawing. Its not the first scene, but does establish these important characters. The third page hasn't been posted here before. I am putting the whole scene (reposting first two pages) in so you can get a better sense of where it's going. I received some helpful criticism for the pages I already posted which I have tried to take into account for the third page. Such as adding a little more detail and texture and trying to use blacks to frame it. Please let me know what you think about ANY aspect of it. page1 Page2 Page3

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