Iron Man

Vizualstimulation · 06-29-2008, 04:16 AM

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Biofungus · 06-29-2008, 05:23 AM

OMG! I'm sorry man, I really do like the concept (the execution is a little flawed), but at 5am, I just had to laugh. With that pose, and the 'smoke' coming off of him, it looks like he just shat out that huge pile of bricks behind him!

Seriously though, the idea/design is sound. Just the pose is a bit strange (his head should be the closest thing towards us, but it looks pushed back, etc).

Vizualstimulation · 06-29-2008, 11:45 PM

Thank You for the crit---Will try to improve

hardinart · 06-30-2008, 01:40 AM

Bio you are a cold hearted bastard

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sevans · 06-30-2008, 06:58 PM

The outer glow is seperating Iron Man from the background even more.
When you are using such different elements to make one image, you shouldn't be highlighting how different they are.

Remove the outer glow. If he was standing there and glowing, so would part of the scenery.

06-29-2008, 04:16 AM	#1
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06-29-2008, 05:23 AM	#2
Biofungus Not for your amusement Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Nega-Earth Posts: 22,083	OMG! I'm sorry man, I really do like the concept (the execution is a little flawed), but at 5am, I just had to laugh. With that pose, and the 'smoke' coming off of him, it looks like he just shat out that huge pile of bricks behind him! Seriously though, the idea/design is sound. Just the pose is a bit strange (his head should be the closest thing towards us, but it looks pushed back, etc).

06-29-2008, 11:45 PM	#3
Vizualstimulation Registered User Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 4	Thank You for the crit---Will try to improve

06-30-2008, 01:40 AM	#4
hardinart the art monkey Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: ENOCH! Posts: 1,237	Bio you are a cold hearted bastard .

06-30-2008, 06:58 PM	#5
sevans www.sevans.co.nz Join Date: May 2004 Location: behind you ...... MotherF**KER! Posts: 4,526	The outer glow is seperating Iron Man from the background even more. When you are using such different elements to make one image, you shouldn't be highlighting how different they are. Remove the outer glow. If he was standing there and glowing, so would part of the scenery.