Some WIP....crits welcome for SDCC

[bluespidey81]

here are the start of some pieces I want to show at SDCC....they are all WIP and I just want to get the anatomy right maybe some tweeking any ideas are welcome....crits welcome only if they are real!!

Spawn


Spiderman


Venom


Wolverine

[hardinart]

If you are going to try and submit to the talent search for Marvel or DC at SDCC they are going to want to see sequential artwork. So start drawing some panels.

[Phatman]

I like the drawings, but listen to what Hardinart said.

[sebzero11]

I love them!

...now, do what Phatman said, and listen to Hardinart!

[secret-identity]

Yeah these are wonderful. Nice poses, nice dynamics.
but go along with Sebzero's suggestion to do what Phatman said; Listen to Hardinart.

[OZ!]

That's right... You know what's coming.

Secret is on to something by having you take Sebzero's advice and listen to what Phatman said about doing what Hardinart told you to do.

Good luck at the con!

[thall838]

i like the designs as well!!! that venom looks awesome!! and yeah i think you should listen to oz and takes secret's advice that sub-zero suggested, that phatman agreed too and listen to hardinart .

[Emperor Zurg]

Your fellow DW'ers are right.... Get some Panels done Stat! Also wouldn't hurt to show some of the ladies too!

[GRIMSCRIBE]

Yeah, where are the girls?
Ron

[bluespidey81]

Ok sooo.....I in fact will listen to Oz and takes Secret's advice about sub-zero's suggestion that phantom aggreed about listening to hardinart....lol and the green grass grows all around all around and the green grass grows all around lol thanks guys

[bluespidey81]

ok....wait a minute any suggestins on the sequentials what should my story be I plan on doin 5-7 pages at least.....I need a story....I was going to do a whole what if batman vs spiderman (no worries MJ would been there)kinda thing but I think people will have done that....any ideas???

[Biofungus]

Don't do any cross company stories. Editors are not generally fond of that (if you ask them, I think they'll cite legal ramifications, although I'm not sure what those are, but you don't want to piss off an editor just because you thought a batman vs. spiderman story would make a cool submission).

If you can, do a DC specific sequential and a Marvel specific sequential.

[pi0trov]

There are plenty of scripts floating around the internet you can use for samples - I'd recommend either using a pro one from a published book (that you haven't read, so you don't know how the published artist did it), or hit up somebody you know, a writer friend or someone online (ask around the writer's forum here and you might find someone willing to help you out...).

Here's a good resource to get you started: http://comicbookscripts.googlepages.com/

And the pics you've posted so far are looking pretty good. Really like that Spidey one, tho Wolvie looks off some how. There's some "balloony" musculature going on in his legs that's kinda wierd. But overall, pretty cool.

[hardinart]

Originally Posted by Biofungus

Don't do any cross company stories. Editors are not generally fond of that (if you ask them, I think they'll cite legal ramifications, although I'm not sure what those are, but you don't want to piss off an editor just because you thought a batman vs. spiderman story would make a cool submission).

If you can, do a DC specific sequential and a Marvel specific sequential.

If you are going to submit to Marvel have a Marvel Sample and vise versa for DC. Editors will look at both but there are STRONG RIVALRIES. Go to the TiPs from the drawing board link- there is a MadCoW post for scripts.

[NakedVitality]

I like your perspective and anatomy. I would be interested to see what you could do with one of these characters from the worm's eye view angle.