Ghost

[newbold]

I'm fairly certain I didn't post this here, yet.

[ponyrl]

would have been better if she was see-through.

[Arne S.]

that's one long thin finger on her right hand. but looks good, i like the background. her breast could have a little more volume (i don't mean bigger)

[scherzo]

Nice composition and terrific background. I like the girl's nice clean lines, although she looks a little off balance. Good job!

-Mark

[GRIMSCRIBE]

Excellent composition, background, everything. And thanks for not putting her hood up, as most illustrations of this character do. A really wonderful rendering.
Ron

[karenspiderwoman]

Beautiful work, when did she get a breast reduction

[xaltair]

Looks very cool, nice details.

[gmsalpha]

I have to agree that her breasts look awfully deflated and saggy. They should definitely be more plump, and like the other fella said, not bigger. Just fuller.

The other thing I noticed is that for all the shadow and mood that you have in the background, there's absolutely none on the character herself. She most definitely needs to have some black shadowy areas on her unless she's emitting light, in which case you'll need to redo some of the shadows in the background.

Fix the lighting and give her breasts some life and it'll be much better. But it's still cool.

[The Anti-crest]

you people are insane. Just because her breasts are gigantic they are 'Deflated and saggy"?

They look like real breasts.

Pic looks awesome, good job.

I love the attention to detail in the background and those statues look beautiful.

[The DarkMind]

Originally Posted by The Anti-crest

you people are insane. Just because her breasts are gigantic they are 'Deflated and saggy"?

They look like real breasts.

Pic looks awesome, good job.

I love the attention to detail in the background and those statues look beautiful.

Yes they look like real breasts, however they look like real breasts on a nude figure with no support. With her garment type, which appears to be a bustier style top, the breasts would be given lift making them appear fuller as with a push-up bra. I believe the term used by Arne was that they should be 'fuller not larger' and I have to agree given the clothing.

btw newbold. my only crit is to be observent to how clothing/costuming affects and shapes the body which is sometimes more difficult then how the body affects the clothing.

[newbold]

The Anti-crest- thanks for the back up and the comments
gmsalpha- she's a ghost, light doesn't affect her.
xaltair-thanks man!
karenspiderwoman- thanks karen, she got a breat reduction in between issues
Ron- thanks a lot man, glad you liked my take.
scherzo- thanks guy! she may in fact be off balance.
Arne S.- thanks man, good point about the finger and couldn't all breasts be bigger?
ponyrl-maybe....... maybe.
dark mind- good things to think about man, thanks!

[jimmybott]

Side stepping the breasts issue for a moment. My only real crit of the image is that she is a little close to the bottom and the side of the page, you could have framed her a little better, setting her in the enviroment a little more. The rendering is as awesome as ever

I like it

[newbold]

jimmybot- thanks guy, good point. I was saving room for the "title"

[jimmybott]

Originally Posted by newbold

jimmybot- thanks guy, good point. I was saving room for the "title"

Hey newbold, I can see the point in saving the room at the top for the title. but she is still a little too close to the edges as she is, even before any cropping occurs. I'd maybe have made her just a tiny bit smaller and maybe tried to create some sort of extreme forground element to totally submerge her in the enviorment around her.

But that's all just a personal opinion of course, I still think its a really good peice

[Arne S.]

couldn't all breasts be bigger?

as i have written, i did not mean bigger but make her form more natural.