Art Dump!!!!

[bluebeast1965]

i decided to get a few of my drawings on here to get some Crits. Hope you like.

[Splatted35]

I like the Wolverine, but you need to draw hands and feet. Most hate to do it, but it stands out when you don't.

[JJ McKool]

Sometimes it's alright to move around, but when you put objects in front of it that are obviously there for that reason...

[EmmasDad]

Originally Posted by JJ McKool

Sometimes it's alright to move around, but when you put objects in front of it that are obviously there for that reason...

Ummmm, care to explain that?

[bluebeast1965]

yeah i didn't catch that last one either. i knoe there are no hands in the first two, but thet are just little sketches. i'll post some stuff with more detail and hands later. but aside form the fact that there are no hands or feet in the first two, i'd like to get some crits and comments on the art itself.

[bluebeast1965]

this may seem like a shameless bump, but it really isn't. i really want some c&c on this. the first two are a new style for me and the beast is my usual style. just looking for ways to improve here. i never really get and c&c when i post here, and it's really hard to improve my art with no feed back. i;m not looking for anyone to kiss my butt and tell me that i;m great, or give me the old "that a boy". i'm a serious artist looking to better himself. thanks.

and i apologize for the rant.

[compton]

the hand thig is a serious crit. the beast seems to have a similar issue

you might also watch the shading of your muscles . most notably on wolverine it makes all the musacles look like they're clumped on top of his actual arm and not connected.

[JJ McKool]

The hatching or feathering or whatever you call it on Wolvie's arms isn't really making sense either.

Originally Posted by EmmasDad

Ummmm, care to explain that?

I's was referring to the hands and feet, like my predecessor.