Gentlemen, strange request...

kmanz55 · 04-14-2008, 10:29 AM

Ok, I'm asking for some advice and even some help. I wrote this five page short story last year, even posted in this forum... Well, use the link and you can see the finished pages. They still need to be lettered but I'm working on it. There's also the copy of the script, so please provide any crits you want. I'm hoping to get this into an anthology, so I'm keeping my fingers crossed. Enjoy,

--Ken

http://www.digitalwebbing.com/forums...d.php?t=123472

knockedoutpanzer · 04-14-2008, 01:07 PM

As it has already been drawn it seems too late to ask for any changes anyway!

That said it looks marvelous. Good luck with the anthology entry.

Mark Bertolini · 04-14-2008, 01:51 PM

Yeah, I wouldn't worry too much, that looks pretty solid.

Good luck!

kmanz55 · 04-16-2008, 01:11 AM

Thanks!!

kmanz55 · 04-16-2008, 09:31 AM

Ugh, I just noticed an error in my script. I'll have to take care of that when I get home. I'm horrible at editing and sometimes, well a good bit, miss something!

bobellis75 · 04-16-2008, 09:51 AM

Looks good! Nice work on this one.

NAS1977 · 04-16-2008, 04:50 PM

I see no problems, either. Excellent job.

Good luck with the anthology!

kmanz55 · 04-16-2008, 10:35 PM

Thanks!! I hope all goes well. Thiago colored page four and five. It's on page two of the link, can't wait to see the rest of them. I'll added it to this when he's done.

04-14-2008, 10:29 AM	#1
kmanz55 "Hack" Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Birmingham, AL Posts: 106	Gentlemen, strange request... Ok, I'm asking for some advice and even some help. I wrote this five page short story last year, even posted in this forum... Well, use the link and you can see the finished pages. They still need to be lettered but I'm working on it. There's also the copy of the script, so please provide any crits you want. I'm hoping to get this into an anthology, so I'm keeping my fingers crossed. Enjoy, --Ken http://www.digitalwebbing.com/forums...d.php?t=123472

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04-14-2008, 01:07 PM	#2
knockedoutpanzer Hails Cthulhu! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: england Posts: 970	As it has already been drawn it seems too late to ask for any changes anyway! That said it looks marvelous. Good luck with the anthology entry.

04-14-2008, 01:51 PM	#3
Mark Bertolini Breakneck from 215 Ink. Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 5,435	Yeah, I wouldn't worry too much, that looks pretty solid. Good luck!

04-16-2008, 01:11 AM	#4
kmanz55 "Hack" Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Birmingham, AL Posts: 106	Thanks!!

04-16-2008, 09:31 AM	#5
kmanz55 "Hack" Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Birmingham, AL Posts: 106	Ugh, I just noticed an error in my script. I'll have to take care of that when I get home. I'm horrible at editing and sometimes, well a good bit, miss something!

04-16-2008, 09:51 AM	#6
bobellis75 Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Kansas City, MO Posts: 62	Looks good! Nice work on this one.

04-16-2008, 04:50 PM	#7
NAS1977 Dancing Monkey Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Wilkes-Barre, PA Posts: 21	I see no problems, either. Excellent job. Good luck with the anthology!

04-16-2008, 10:35 PM	#8
kmanz55 "Hack" Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Birmingham, AL Posts: 106	Thanks!! I hope all goes well. Thiago colored page four and five. It's on page two of the link, can't wait to see the rest of them. I'll added it to this when he's done.