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Old 04-10-2008, 02:00 PM   #1
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Some pages from me

The character belongs to hold the pair Jorge Blanco / JOK.
Those who commissioned me to do this shows that unfortunately not going to draw me.
But you may read new comics magazine in the next Magma magazine from Thalos publishers.

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PD: sorry but the comic its in spanish like the original.



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Old 04-23-2008, 04:00 PM   #2
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hey!what happend?any respond about my comic?
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Old 04-23-2008, 04:23 PM   #3
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I wish I could understand Spanish,because that is some nice art.Very well drawn,sort of reminds me of Bruce Timm.
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Old 04-23-2008, 04:27 PM   #4
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I wish I could understand Spanish,because that is some nice art.Very well drawn,sort of reminds me of Bruce Timm.
Thank U for the compares
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Old 04-23-2008, 04:35 PM   #5
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I wish I could understand Spanish,because that is some nice art.Very well drawn,sort of reminds me of Bruce Timm.
I dont understand english sometime some sequential in this place, but I every send my opinion about the line art.
Dont worry,i understand you position
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Old 04-23-2008, 05:40 PM   #6
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The art is pretty great. I especially appreciate how solidly constructed everything is.
However, You need better lettering, or you need to hire a letter to do these pages. The subpar lettering here brings down your otherwise very good artwork.
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Old 04-23-2008, 05:51 PM   #7
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The art is pretty great. I especially appreciate how solidly constructed everything is.
However, You need better lettering, or you need to hire a letter to do these pages. The subpar lettering here brings down your otherwise very good artwork.
Thank U man I appreciate you opinion.

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Old 04-24-2008, 05:59 AM   #8
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Beautiful!!!

I loved all of these! But most of the pages look kind of too cramped! Otherwise, they're all good stuff!
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Old 04-24-2008, 11:05 PM   #9
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I loved all of these! But most of the pages look kind of too cramped! Otherwise, they're all good stuff!
thank you very much really esteem their words, they fill me to the knowledge of great satisfaction that you side, people like you, appreciates my work. Greetings.

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Old 04-25-2008, 02:18 AM   #10
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demonio! verry interesting style its like beef stew I like it! some of your text runs into the borders of your captions. but otherwise it looks cool!
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demonio! verry interesting style its like beef stew I like it! some of your text runs into the borders of your captions. but otherwise it looks cool!
Thank U so much pal,for the future I think make a version in english.Greetings

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Old 04-26-2008, 08:08 PM   #12
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Yeah you have a very nice clean style but it is a little cramped on the page. I would probably be fixed with color, another thing would be to give a little more white space on the page to separate characters and action from the background. Other then that it's a really nice piece of work that you should really be proud of.
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Old 04-26-2008, 09:01 PM   #13
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Yeah you have a very nice clean style but it is a little cramped on the page. I would probably be fixed with color, another thing would be to give a little more white space on the page to separate characters and action from the background. Other then that it's a really nice piece of work that you should really be proud of.
wow! friend thank you very much appreciate your words and encourages me even more.

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Old 05-01-2008, 03:58 PM   #14
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I'm semi-fluent in Spanish, enough to get the gist of what was being said, and I liked it!
Creo que el arte era muy facil para ti a dibujar, y muy limpio. (es mas facil para mi a entender espanol que hablarlo) Hopefully that was right.
(I said "The art was very effortless-looking, very clean," and that it's easier for me to understand Spanish than it is for me to speak it)

Good stuff

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Old 05-01-2008, 05:15 PM   #15
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I'm semi-fluent in Spanish, enough to get the gist of what was being said, and I liked it!
Creo que el arte era muy facil para ti a dibujar, y muy limpio. (es mas facil para mi a entender espanol que hablarlo) Hopefully that was right.
(I said "The art was very effortless-looking, very clean," and that it's easier for me to understand Spanish than it is for me to speak it)

Good stuff

Fred
Fred thank you very much, I am glad that you understand the content of this story.
Now I am drawn by these pages in a fanzine with many Latin American artists, Colombia, Peru and Argentina.
So in truth, I'm very happy with that.
Soon I will have news about this story, and if they liked, I will give you continuity.
A greeting
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