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www.sapienstoonz.netfirms
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Argentina
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Some pages from me
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www.sapienstoonz.netfirms
Join Date: Oct 2005
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hey!what happend?any respond about my comic?
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jeffo46
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Woonsocket,R.I.
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I wish I could understand Spanish,because that is some nice art.Very well drawn,sort of reminds me of Bruce Timm.
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Dont worry,i understand you position
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God's Lonely Man
Join Date: May 2003
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The art is pretty great. I especially appreciate how solidly constructed everything is.
However, You need better lettering, or you need to hire a letter to do these pages. The subpar lettering here brings down your otherwise very good artwork. |
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Registered User
Join Date: Apr 2007
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Beautiful!!!
I loved all of these! But most of the pages look kind of too cramped! Otherwise, they're all good stuff!
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Habitual Pencil User
Join Date: Feb 2008
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demonio! verry interesting style its like beef stew I like it!
some of your text runs into the borders of your captions. but otherwise it looks cool!
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Registered User
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: Portland Or.
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Yeah you have a very nice clean style but it is a little cramped on the page. I would probably be fixed with color, another thing would be to give a little more white space on the page to separate characters and action from the background. Other then that it's a really nice piece of work that you should really be proud of.
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Master Lurker
Join Date: Apr 2004
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I'm semi-fluent in Spanish, enough to get the gist of what was being said, and I liked it!
Creo que el arte era muy facil para ti a dibujar, y muy limpio. (es mas facil para mi a entender espanol que hablarlo) Hopefully that was right. (I said "The art was very effortless-looking, very clean," and that it's easier for me to understand Spanish than it is for me to speak it) Good stuff Fred |
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www.sapienstoonz.netfirms
Join Date: Oct 2005
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Now I am drawn by these pages in a fanzine with many Latin American artists, Colombia, Peru and Argentina. So in truth, I'm very happy with that. Soon I will have news about this story, and if they liked, I will give you continuity. A greeting |
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