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[Chicken]

Hi everyone,

I had this idea floating around in my head and decided to finally sit down and write it out. I'm most certainly a rookie when it comes to comic writing. I'm not a big fan of 'capes' and my little story doesn't fall into that genre. It's more sci-fi then anything.

I've had a few of my friends read through it and they've all seemed to think it has some merit, so I figured I'd take another step forward and see what all of you think.

I've placed a PDF of it Here

Please feel free to give it a read and let me know if you have any helpful suggestions.

Also, if you're an artist and you read through and fall in love with it, let me know if you'd like to work on it with me.

Thanks in advance everyone!