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03-11-2008, 12:40 PM
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I look work in comics.
Join Date: Sep 2006
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Pages of Corrective Measures#8
it follows samples of the work that one of my artist this doing.
the name is Corrective Measures. The artist's name is elias Martins. Cover:  Page 1:  Page 2:  Page 3:  Page 4:  Thanx! Marcelo Salaza casaqueviti@gmail.com Msn: casaqueviti@hotmail.com |
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03-14-2008, 03:06 PM
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I need vacations.
Join Date: Nov 2004
Posts: 614
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Some crits for your artist:
On the cover, the guy's left arm looks too short. On Page 2 and Page 4, the helicopter would benefit with some speed lines on the rotorblades. You have some speed lines in the tail rotor on Page 4, but not on the main rotorblades? I don't know what's on the script, but Page 3 seems too constricted, and may have problems with balloon placement if the text is too extensive. Love the "Payback" title on the mountains. Very retro. The inks are excellent, and the storytelling is pretty good. |
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03-14-2008, 05:15 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2008
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Yep Everything looks good..I really Like page 3..
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03-14-2008, 08:58 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 200
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Looks like a lot of flash, and not a lot of substance.
The inks are pretty, and he's got some good detail, but there are serious anatomy issues. |
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03-15-2008, 04:04 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 177
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Lets see some more stuff...I like this artist...
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