The Ghost Who Walks

DCON · 03-04-2008, 10:52 AM

Let me know what you guys think?

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dpendleton · 03-04-2008, 11:04 AM

Damn man I like this right here, good work.

JamieRoberts · 03-04-2008, 11:38 AM

Y'know, I just spent a few minutes trying to pick out something to crit, since I usually don't offer anything. You make it hard to do so. This is a fantastic piece, and makes me want to read some Phantom comics.

The only things I could think of as far as offering crits are related to the background, which I think could be slightly more dramatic, although the composition works very well here, and the gun in his hand, which looks a little too large. Again, it looks great in the context of the image though, and I wonder whether shrinking it down might take some of the impact away?

Anyway, great stuff.

xaltair · 03-04-2008, 12:01 PM

Looks very cool, the shading on the rock although cool as well looks kinda strage, it makes it look organic instead of a rock like structure.

j giar · 03-04-2008, 04:01 PM

This is beautiful pencil work and really nothing jumps at me (no pun intended). The textures don't bother me at all but the area at the waist by the rib cage is a little thick. Take your finger or thumb and cover a portion of the mass by his gun belt on the screen and you'll see what I mean. Nice work...very nice. Jim

sevans · 03-04-2008, 04:40 PM

2 minor crits. His hand was hard to see against the big cat and I'm not sure about his knee - kinda confusing anatomy there.

Otherwise, a very cool piece. Great pencilwork.

GRIMSCRIBE · 03-04-2008, 04:52 PM

As a Phantom fan, I love this piece. Just gripping.
Ron

mrwewiii · 03-04-2008, 04:54 PM

brilliant! just brilliant

Paul Sanderson · 03-04-2008, 06:14 PM

Looks great, though it almost looks like you've given the Phantom gloves, and he doesn't wear gloves. Also, the character looks best with an old fashioned "retro" look, but that's out of your hands. Nevertheless, this is very good.

Miguel Marques · 03-04-2008, 06:16 PM

Phatman · 03-04-2008, 06:21 PM

The anatomy in the left leg is a bit off, but I really like the composition of this piece. Nice work.

Adam Black · 03-04-2008, 06:39 PM

His legs and his lat are a bit off, but I really dig this piece. Almost has a Tim Vigil vibe to it.

DCON · 03-05-2008, 08:53 AM

Thanks guys!

03-04-2008, 10:52 AM	#1
DCON Registered User Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: hollywood florida - Queens New York Posts: 172	The Ghost Who Walks Let me know what you guys think? .

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03-04-2008, 11:04 AM	#2
dpendleton Is a sexual being. Join Date: May 2003 Location: washington,dc Posts: 750	Damn man I like this right here, good work.

03-04-2008, 11:38 AM	#3
JamieRoberts Registered User Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Manchester, UK Posts: 3,689	Y'know, I just spent a few minutes trying to pick out something to crit, since I usually don't offer anything. You make it hard to do so. This is a fantastic piece, and makes me want to read some Phantom comics. The only things I could think of as far as offering crits are related to the background, which I think could be slightly more dramatic, although the composition works very well here, and the gun in his hand, which looks a little too large. Again, it looks great in the context of the image though, and I wonder whether shrinking it down might take some of the impact away? Anyway, great stuff.

03-04-2008, 12:01 PM	#4
xaltair Boobies Master Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,315	Looks very cool, the shading on the rock although cool as well looks kinda strage, it makes it look organic instead of a rock like structure.

03-04-2008, 04:01 PM	#5
j giar Has nothing to add. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Elyria, Ohio Posts: 5,968	This is beautiful pencil work and really nothing jumps at me (no pun intended). The textures don't bother me at all but the area at the waist by the rib cage is a little thick. Take your finger or thumb and cover a portion of the mass by his gun belt on the screen and you'll see what I mean. Nice work...very nice. Jim

03-04-2008, 04:40 PM	#6
sevans www.sevans.co.nz Join Date: May 2004 Location: behind you ...... MotherF**KER! Posts: 4,526	2 minor crits. His hand was hard to see against the big cat and I'm not sure about his knee - kinda confusing anatomy there. Otherwise, a very cool piece. Great pencilwork.

03-04-2008, 04:52 PM	#7
GRIMSCRIBE Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Fort Collins, CO Posts: 1,997	As a Phantom fan, I love this piece. Just gripping. Ron

03-04-2008, 04:54 PM	#8
mrwewiii its not mr weewee! Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 645	brilliant! just brilliant

03-04-2008, 06:14 PM	#9
Paul Sanderson Dread Avenger Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Metro City Posts: 12,414	Looks great, though it almost looks like you've given the Phantom gloves, and he doesn't wear gloves. Also, the character looks best with an old fashioned "retro" look, but that's out of your hands. Nevertheless, this is very good.

03-04-2008, 06:16 PM	#10
Miguel Marques Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Brasil Posts: 2,068

03-04-2008, 06:21 PM	#11
Phatman Midi-chlorians are a lie! Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Folsom, CA Posts: 4,443	The anatomy in the left leg is a bit off, but I really like the composition of this piece. Nice work.

03-04-2008, 06:39 PM	#12
Adam Black Can't draw for $hit! Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: The Happy Land Inside My Head. Posts: 167	His legs and his lat are a bit off, but I really dig this piece. Almost has a Tim Vigil vibe to it.

03-05-2008, 08:53 AM	#13
DCON Registered User Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: hollywood florida - Queens New York Posts: 172	Thanks guys!