Maybe Nobody Will Notice - Page 2

ronin300 · 03-01-2008, 09:37 AM

Seems I agree with about everyone. I really like these pages. Clean, easy to read and the characters have a great flow to them. Body language is spot on. Do you start with gesture drawings? The boys ear in the second panal of page one looks a bit wonky, but really that's a bit of a nitpick.

**Kep!** · 03-01-2008, 01:07 PM

Very clean. I have nothing to say about the art...it just works.

The lettering...well...that's distracting from your pretty lines...not happy about it at all. But the art is just swell!

Miguel Marques · 03-01-2008, 01:12 PM

03-01-2008, 01:07 PM	#17
Kep! Self-Evident Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: He's EVERYWHERE! He's EVERYWHERE! Posts: 8,771	Very clean. I have nothing to say about the art...it just works. The lettering...well...that's distracting from your pretty lines...not happy about it at all. But the art is just swell! __________________ AEIOU, *Kep!* Writer, Letterer, Magician & Sophist www.wordybastard.com Why yes, I am on Facebook, thanks for asking

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03-01-2008, 09:37 AM	#16
ronin300 Registered User Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 83	Seems I agree with about everyone. I really like these pages. Clean, easy to read and the characters have a great flow to them. Body language is spot on. Do you start with gesture drawings? The boys ear in the second panal of page one looks a bit wonky, but really that's a bit of a nitpick.

03-01-2008, 01:12 PM	#18
Miguel Marques Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Brasil Posts: 2,072