Robin, the Boy Wonder

massacremike · 01-21-2008, 02:23 AM

My first drawing of the New Year - completed on January 2nd.
Hope you like, lemme know what you think!

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onizuka43 · 01-21-2008, 02:35 AM

Great background and great facial expressions. there is a little weird flare with the cape that just looks off, and the waist looks like it is missing a chunk out of it that it hurts the way his legs are positioned. Other then that it looks good. Keep up the good work.

xaltair · 01-21-2008, 12:54 PM

Looks cool, arms seem a little too small/short.

albone · 01-21-2008, 02:38 PM

It looks good until the lower torso and then it sort of loses believability. I think the proportions are right and the perspective is on. Good hands too.

massacremike · 01-21-2008, 02:53 PM

Many thanks for these constructive crits, folks!

I agree with everyone but appreciate having them pointed out by other in a contructive way such as you've done.

Very helpful!

01-21-2008, 02:23 AM	#1
massacremike Registered User Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada Posts: 75	Robin, the Boy Wonder My first drawing of the New Year - completed on January 2nd. Hope you like, lemme know what you think! [IMG][/IMG] Last edited by massacremike; 01-21-2008 at 02:23 AM. Reason: Spelling error

01-21-2008, 02:53 PM	#5
massacremike Registered User Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada Posts: 75	Thank You Many thanks for these constructive crits, folks! I agree with everyone but appreciate having them pointed out by other in a contructive way such as you've done. Very helpful!

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01-21-2008, 02:35 AM	#2
onizuka43 Registered User Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Portland Or. Posts: 722	Great background and great facial expressions. there is a little weird flare with the cape that just looks off, and the waist looks like it is missing a chunk out of it that it hurts the way his legs are positioned. Other then that it looks good. Keep up the good work.

01-21-2008, 12:54 PM	#3
xaltair Boobies Master Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,315	Looks cool, arms seem a little too small/short.

01-21-2008, 02:38 PM	#4
albone Jabbroni Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Milwaukee Posts: 1,256	It looks good until the lower torso and then it sort of loses believability. I think the proportions are right and the perspective is on. Good hands too.