space ninja almost starwars

consumer12002 · 01-04-2008, 01:53 AM

doh! my scanner's driver is acting up right now. Such a pain that mustek A3, So I guess for now Im going to resort to posting an image that was posted on a previous post that I posted with other images.(makes sense?)

feel free to request, I'm running out of ideas.
alright back to pulling pixels and moving curves.

Enjoy
Senk

Luke de Sade · 01-04-2008, 08:08 AM

Holy friggin' awesomeness! I like it a lot. Nice pencils.

One question, though. Are those metal wings on the guy's back? 'Cause I'm feeling them kinda detached. And there are some weird perspective issues with the robot's guns.

Zero-Optix · 01-04-2008, 12:30 PM

Nice work and would look cool inked and colored, so you need to separate the foreground from the middle ground and the background to make it pop. This has a lot energy in the pose too.

consumer12002 · 01-05-2008, 01:42 AM

Luke,Zero-thanks for the kind words. Yeah, them wings, darker lines......tisk tisk....probably was a bad design choice anyways. It was a last minute thing where you just go in and say, what if I put robotic wings? Silly me he already has a space ship, why in the world would he have wings for anyways...

Guess this one goes in the round bin.

Senk

Zero-Optix · 01-05-2008, 02:32 AM

I think its a cool idea.... he could use the force to move himself so far and then glide...or maybe its a specialty equipment design for the mission. like gliding down a cliff in silence to take out sentries.

MARK A ROBINSON · 01-05-2008, 02:47 AM

Nice.

I'd only go for one thing in the future to make your stuff even more dynamic.

Harsher angles to denote more movement.

I second the Metal wing thing as well. Maybe some sort of jump-pack or harness could make it more clearer?

M.

consumer12002 · 01-05-2008, 08:39 AM

Zero- you might be right a second wing comes in handy sometimes

Mark-yeah, I use to try hard to avoid them hard lines and hard angles, just a preference, but now that I've tried it more often, it's scary how the feel of the image changes. I'm trying to balance the two right now.

Here's another one of them space ninja, a little bit more action, but a lot sketchier.

Senk

vector · 01-05-2008, 02:57 PM

Both drawings are great! Keep up the excellent work!

Steve

Erik Burnham · 01-05-2008, 03:01 PM

I really liked that second piece. Great action to it.

The first piece, immediate thought that came to mind was:

"Peter Pan. Ed 209. They are not the ones with whom to %$#@."

But again, love that second one and certainly wouldn't mind taking a crack at inking it (if I had a printer handy, I probably would!)

consumer12002 · 01-06-2008, 04:38 AM

vector-thanks

Eric-Thanks, you should hurry and find one.

xaltair · 01-06-2008, 02:08 PM

VEry cool...that bike behind him looks so awesome as well.

consumer12002 · 01-06-2008, 02:51 PM

xaltair-glad you like.

algenous · 01-08-2008, 06:25 AM

hi, i hope i could find a tip book from you....it's all great....

bakatron · 01-08-2008, 06:34 AM

im a fan

01-04-2008, 01:53 AM	#1
consumer12002 Illustrator/Animator Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Long Beach Posts: 395	space ninja almost starwars doh! my scanner's driver is acting up right now. Such a pain that mustek A3, So I guess for now Im going to resort to posting an image that was posted on a previous post that I posted with other images.(makes sense?) feel free to request, I'm running out of ideas. alright back to pulling pixels and moving curves. Enjoy Senk

01-05-2008, 02:47 AM	#6
MARK A ROBINSON Habitual Line Stepper Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: West Philly 4 NOW! Posts: 1,540	Nice. I'd only go for one thing in the future to make your stuff even more dynamic. Harsher angles to denote more movement. I second the Metal wing thing as well. Maybe some sort of jump-pack or harness could make it more clearer? M. __________________ Megalomaniac @ LARGE http://marsisalientechnology.blogspot.com/ http://http://alientechnology2mars.deviantart.co m/ https://www.facebook.com/pages/Battl...02325799795409 Last edited by MARK A ROBINSON; 01-05-2008 at 02:44 PM.

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01-04-2008, 08:08 AM	#2
Luke de Sade I need vacations. Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 614	Holy friggin' awesomeness! I like it a lot. Nice pencils. One question, though. Are those metal wings on the guy's back? 'Cause I'm feeling them kinda detached. And there are some weird perspective issues with the robot's guns.

01-04-2008, 12:30 PM	#3
Zero-Optix art Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Joplin, Missouri Posts: 432	Nice work and would look cool inked and colored, so you need to separate the foreground from the middle ground and the background to make it pop. This has a lot energy in the pose too.

01-05-2008, 01:42 AM	#4
consumer12002 Illustrator/Animator Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Long Beach Posts: 395	Luke,Zero-thanks for the kind words. Yeah, them wings, darker lines......tisk tisk....probably was a bad design choice anyways. It was a last minute thing where you just go in and say, what if I put robotic wings? Silly me he already has a space ship, why in the world would he have wings for anyways... Guess this one goes in the round bin. Senk

01-05-2008, 02:32 AM	#5
Zero-Optix art Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Joplin, Missouri Posts: 432	I think its a cool idea.... he could use the force to move himself so far and then glide...or maybe its a specialty equipment design for the mission. like gliding down a cliff in silence to take out sentries.

01-05-2008, 08:39 AM	#7
consumer12002 Illustrator/Animator Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Long Beach Posts: 395	Zero- you might be right a second wing comes in handy sometimes Mark-yeah, I use to try hard to avoid them hard lines and hard angles, just a preference, but now that I've tried it more often, it's scary how the feel of the image changes. I'm trying to balance the two right now. Here's another one of them space ninja, a little bit more action, but a lot sketchier. Senk

01-05-2008, 02:57 PM	#8
vector Registered User Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: naples,FL Posts: 362	Both drawings are great! Keep up the excellent work! Steve

01-05-2008, 03:01 PM	#9
Erik Burnham Registered User Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 24	I really liked that second piece. Great action to it. The first piece, immediate thought that came to mind was: "Peter Pan. Ed 209. They are not the ones with whom to %$#@." But again, love that second one and certainly wouldn't mind taking a crack at inking it (if I had a printer handy, I probably would!)

01-06-2008, 04:38 AM	#10
consumer12002 Illustrator/Animator Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Long Beach Posts: 395	vector-thanks Eric-Thanks, you should hurry and find one.

01-06-2008, 02:08 PM	#11
xaltair Boobies Master Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,315	VEry cool...that bike behind him looks so awesome as well.

01-06-2008, 02:51 PM	#12
consumer12002 Illustrator/Animator Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Long Beach Posts: 395	xaltair-glad you like.

01-08-2008, 06:34 AM	#14
bakatron lord of the cheese Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 167	im a fan

01-08-2008, 06:25 AM	#13
algenous Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 95	hi, i hope i could find a tip book from you....it's all great....