superman , ole school green goblin, n stuff

canucklehead · 12-12-2007, 05:03 PM

thanks to all who for their comments etc
i went back through sketch books to see where i went astray
it seems i over ink my stuff , im pretty heavy handed renderer and that mixed with a heavy ink, equals one big mess.
hope u like these older works, workin on new stuff now

by the way, thanks to those who suggested the will eisner book

Ransak · 12-12-2007, 05:10 PM

As I looked at your stuff, I was going to ask about your inking...brush, pen, crow-quill, all of the above?

I dig your pencils, and would like to see some ink...

xaltair · 12-12-2007, 05:44 PM

Very nice stuff, however superman and the winged guy's legs seem to be too short. I don't know why but they just are. The lady's bent leg seems to be short as well, although i can't tell since it's not finished.

Great renderings and shadings though.

canucklehead · 12-12-2007, 06:00 PM

none of the above, ive been doing ass backwards ....i ink and draw at the same time and the primary weapon of choice...sharpies!
i just bought some new pens and inking markers but if you have suggestions im open to that

xaltair · 12-12-2007, 06:03 PM

They look very awesome, especially the shading...keep in mind the length of their legs though.

Ransak · 12-12-2007, 06:04 PM

Brushes are a bitch and a half, but so worth it to learn...do a search for brush pens and work from there...crow-quills make a nice middle of the road tool.

Either way,

Xaltair's right though, be mindful of your proportions...not that I should talk, it's just something I noticed.

canucklehead · 12-12-2007, 11:13 PM

thanks guys
i picked up a staedtler brush pen tonight ... ill give it a whirl
post something soon

drewerd · 12-12-2007, 11:57 PM

i like these a lot. These seem kind of static though. I like the details and compostion the most.

Great stuff

Drew

bakatron · 12-13-2007, 01:09 AM

you know id love to see your work in ink. overall i think the slight issue i have is being able to discern the foreground from the background which im seeing with the green goblin piece. so - some ink would do you good

12-12-2007, 05:03 PM	#1
canucklehead canucklehead Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In the back of my head Posts: 46	superman , ole school green goblin, n stuff thanks to all who for their comments etc i went back through sketch books to see where i went astray it seems i over ink my stuff , im pretty heavy handed renderer and that mixed with a heavy ink, equals one big mess. hope u like these older works, workin on new stuff now by the way, thanks to those who suggested the will eisner book

12-12-2007, 06:04 PM	#6
Ransak I'm Rick James, bitch. Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Queens, NYC Posts: 401	Don't fear the brush, bro Brushes are a bitch and a half, but so worth it to learn...do a search for brush pens and work from there...crow-quills make a nice middle of the road tool. Either way, Xaltair's right though, be mindful of your proportions...not that I should talk, it's just something I noticed.

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12-12-2007, 05:10 PM	#2
Ransak I'm Rick James, bitch. Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Queens, NYC Posts: 401	As I looked at your stuff, I was going to ask about your inking...brush, pen, crow-quill, all of the above? I dig your pencils, and would like to see some ink...

12-12-2007, 05:44 PM	#3
xaltair Boobies Master Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,315	Very nice stuff, however superman and the winged guy's legs seem to be too short. I don't know why but they just are. The lady's bent leg seems to be short as well, although i can't tell since it's not finished. Great renderings and shadings though.

12-12-2007, 06:00 PM	#4
canucklehead canucklehead Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In the back of my head Posts: 46	none of the above, ive been doing ass backwards ....i ink and draw at the same time and the primary weapon of choice...sharpies! i just bought some new pens and inking markers but if you have suggestions im open to that

12-12-2007, 06:03 PM	#5
xaltair Boobies Master Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,315	They look very awesome, especially the shading...keep in mind the length of their legs though.

12-12-2007, 11:13 PM	#7
canucklehead canucklehead Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In the back of my head Posts: 46	thanks guys i picked up a staedtler brush pen tonight ... ill give it a whirl post something soon

12-12-2007, 11:57 PM	#8
drewerd Dancing on the Ceiling Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: I like trees Posts: 849	i like these a lot. These seem kind of static though. I like the details and compostion the most. Great stuff Drew

12-13-2007, 01:09 AM	#9
bakatron lord of the cheese Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 167	you know id love to see your work in ink. overall i think the slight issue i have is being able to discern the foreground from the background which im seeing with the green goblin piece. so - some ink would do you good