Spiderman Again

jeffo46 · 11-26-2007, 11:33 AM

My apologies to everyone.It seems that I drew Spidey's logo with only 2 legs on it.Here it is again,re-don

e the way it should be.

Shin_Jinlaw · 11-26-2007, 11:51 AM

This is nice. But I think you should round off his left quad. Seems off.

His waist area seems small. His stomach area is rather small. His lower legs is also small, and his knees is a too big.

Great composition, and you have great talent. This one just needs a little more work.

jeffo46 · 11-26-2007, 01:12 PM

Thanks for the critique.At heart,I am a inker.Pencilling was never really my strong suit.

Shin_Jinlaw · 11-26-2007, 01:37 PM

Make it your strong suit man. You have the talent for it. Don't waste it.

Keep working at it, because it isn't bad at all.

11-26-2007, 11:33 AM	#1
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11-26-2007, 11:51 AM	#2
Shin_Jinlaw Video Game crack fiend!! Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Video Game Crack House. Soon will cease all outside contact when MGS4 comes out. Posts: 387	This is nice. But I think you should round off his left quad. Seems off. His waist area seems small. His stomach area is rather small. His lower legs is also small, and his knees is a too big. Great composition, and you have great talent. This one just needs a little more work.

11-26-2007, 01:12 PM	#3
jeffo46 jeffo46 Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Woonsocket,R.I. Posts: 1,463	Thanks for the critique.At heart,I am a inker.Pencilling was never really my strong suit.

11-26-2007, 01:37 PM	#4
Shin_Jinlaw Video Game crack fiend!! Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Video Game Crack House. Soon will cease all outside contact when MGS4 comes out. Posts: 387	Make it your strong suit man. You have the talent for it. Don't waste it. Keep working at it, because it isn't bad at all.