Flash: Gathered Intelligence

joeyjarin · 10-14-2007, 04:55 AM

Title: Flash: Gathered Intelligence
Writer: Ugga Bugga
Artist: Joe Jarin

joeyjarin · 10-14-2007, 04:56 AM

joeyjarin · 10-14-2007, 04:56 AM

d_art · 10-25-2007, 01:25 AM

i like the writing and the pace.

William Blankenship · 10-25-2007, 05:25 AM

Interesting stuff, I like the pacing as well.

TomPettyIsGod · 10-25-2007, 11:54 AM

Nice progression with good transitioning. Very well done.

joeyjarin · 10-25-2007, 12:02 PM

Thanks

vator69 · 10-25-2007, 12:37 PM

has a really nice flow to it,

Lord Fejj · 10-25-2007, 06:37 PM

Nice! The color seems a little saturated, it might look good to tone it down a bit, esp. the backgrounds, this could help give it more depth.

joeyjarin · 10-25-2007, 09:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lord Fejj

Nice! The color seems a little saturated, it might look good to tone it down a bit, esp. the backgrounds, this could help give it more depth.

You're right about the color. I'll tone it down a bit. Less is more

Thanks for all the comments.

Comics Commando · 10-28-2007, 01:44 AM

Missing lots of commas, which pulls me out of the reading experience.

10-14-2007, 04:55 AM	#1
joeyjarin Registered User Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 20	Flash: Gathered Intelligence Title: Flash: Gathered Intelligence Writer: Ugga Bugga Artist: Joe Jarin

10-28-2007, 01:44 AM	#11
Comics Commando Registered User Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 590	punctuation Missing lots of commas, which pulls me out of the reading experience.

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10-14-2007, 04:56 AM	#2
joeyjarin Registered User Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 20

10-25-2007, 01:25 AM	#4
d_art Prefers eggs over-easy Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: la mirada, ca Posts: 92	i like the writing and the pace.

10-25-2007, 05:25 AM	#5
William Blankenship Inconsequential Nobody Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Blankenship estate. Posts: 2,118	Interesting stuff, I like the pacing as well.

10-25-2007, 11:54 AM	#6
TomPettyIsGod Faithful Believer Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Rockville, MD Posts: 7	Nice progression with good transitioning. Very well done.

10-25-2007, 12:02 PM	#7
joeyjarin Registered User Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 20	Thanks

10-25-2007, 12:37 PM	#8
vator69 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: manchester Posts: 106	has a really nice flow to it,

10-25-2007, 06:37 PM	#9
Lord Fejj Be water my friend... Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The Tang Dynasty Posts: 1,598	Nice! The color seems a little saturated, it might look good to tone it down a bit, esp. the backgrounds, this could help give it more depth.