My first sequential coloring

rancez · 09-06-2007, 04:25 PM

Hi!! I'm new in coloring and in the forum (and writing in english).
This is my first sequential art!!! I'll be waiting your C&C!!! I am learning watching other jobs and listening your advices.
Battle Chasers
It's from the comic Battle Chasers
Pencils: Joe Madureira
Ink: Tom McWeeney

Miguel Marques · 09-06-2007, 05:18 PM

Good work and good luck in works.
In the page it thinks it only lacked more
volumes and separation of vision plans.

rancez · 09-06-2007, 05:22 PM

Thank you Miguel! Ok, I'll work in volumes... but what does "vision plans" mean?¿?
I understand english but sometimes It's dificult to me.
Thank you again!!

Miguel Marques · 09-06-2007, 05:31 PM

See oque I answered in this topic think it serves a little for you.

http://www.digitalwebbing.com/forums...69#post1263669

rancez · 09-06-2007, 05:36 PM

Thank you again! It was easy to understand!! I'll try to work on it.

bluepen · 09-07-2007, 03:42 AM

nice work, but i think the pink BG is off. that's only me no biggy, just practice more.

mudcat · 09-07-2007, 11:13 AM

There's a lot of K in your background colors that's really muddying up the lineart. In some spots the K is so heavy that it's almost pure black. Try dropping out the K levels in your backgrounds, and then desaturate the new colors a bit.

rancez · 09-07-2007, 12:59 PM

Thanks you all! Mudcat, I agree with you. I'll do that right now.
Thank you people, your advices are teaching me a lot.
----
My english sucks!

09-06-2007, 04:25 PM	#1
rancez New colorist is borning! Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 88	My first sequential coloring Hi!! I'm new in coloring and in the forum (and writing in english). This is my first sequential art!!! I'll be waiting your C&C!!! I am learning watching other jobs and listening your advices. Battle Chasers It's from the comic Battle Chasers Pencils: Joe Madureira Ink: Tom McWeeney

09-06-2007, 05:18 PM	#2
Miguel Marques Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Brasil Posts: 2,068	Good work and good luck in works. In the page it thinks it only lacked more volumes and separation of vision plans. Last edited by Miguel Marques; 09-06-2007 at 05:24 PM.

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09-06-2007, 05:22 PM	#3
rancez New colorist is borning! Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 88	Thank you Miguel! Ok, I'll work in volumes... but what does "vision plans" mean?¿? I understand english but sometimes It's dificult to me. Thank you again!!

09-06-2007, 05:31 PM	#4
Miguel Marques Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Brasil Posts: 2,068	See oque I answered in this topic think it serves a little for you. http://www.digitalwebbing.com/forums...69#post1263669

09-06-2007, 05:36 PM	#5
rancez New colorist is borning! Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 88	Thank you again! It was easy to understand!! I'll try to work on it.

09-07-2007, 03:42 AM	#6
bluepen Freelance Colorist Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Philippines Posts: 414	nice work, but i think the pink BG is off. that's only me no biggy, just practice more.

09-07-2007, 11:13 AM	#7
mudcat Registered User Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Post Falls, ID Posts: 671	There's a lot of K in your background colors that's really muddying up the lineart. In some spots the K is so heavy that it's almost pure black. Try dropping out the K levels in your backgrounds, and then desaturate the new colors a bit.

09-07-2007, 12:59 PM	#8
rancez New colorist is borning! Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 88	Thanks you all! Mudcat, I agree with you. I'll do that right now. Thank you people, your advices are teaching me a lot. ---- My english sucks!