Fantastic Four

Hanzou · 07-08-2007, 10:08 PM

I missed the deadline for this drawoff since I was out of town. Here was my entry anyway, so let me know what you guys think of it;

BlaiddDrwg · 07-08-2007, 10:41 PM

I absolutely adore this style. It's something a haven't seen before; a cross between a cartoon style and a more serious style. Definitely look great. The only thing that stands out is Sue's left hand looks a little big. Still, great piece.

NGoff · 07-08-2007, 11:08 PM

Very nice tonal rendering there, Hanzou! Especially on the thing with the light of the HT.

Speaking of which, although you have great melding of characters in the design, he may be too much of a tangent with Mr. F. Maybe if you brought the HT's flame tail more into the BG behind Mr. F (like you started a bit) and at a sharper angle just where it meets him. Not literally sharp....just curved more, you know?

Great stuff, can't wait for more!

-Nicole =)

rplatt · 07-08-2007, 11:13 PM

Very impressive! Great work, Hanzou!

xaltair · 07-09-2007, 12:48 AM

Very cool, sue storm doesn't quite seem to fit in though.

joh james · 07-09-2007, 09:42 AM

It has a brushwork feel in some places. Almost Painterly. Damn shame it didn't make print. Good luck, Hanzou. Some high caliber stuff on your hands!

JLillustrator · 07-09-2007, 01:38 PM

Really nice work with the tones/grays used to define form and volume. Great looking characters, just watch I.W.'s hands, make them smaller than her face and you are good to go.

Javier
www.comicspace.com/jlugographics

Saul Haber · 07-09-2007, 09:03 PM

Really smooth grays. They're very beautiful. The Thing looks a little awkward, though, but this is some really nice work.

The-Spirit · 07-10-2007, 05:33 AM

Very nice, I'd love to see a BW book done completely like this. It pops out really well.

Necromancer XI · 07-10-2007, 07:02 AM

wow awesome man really your grayscaling is admirable
you got yourself a new fan
take care
Ross

Hanzou · 07-10-2007, 12:05 PM

Wow, thanks for the comments everyone. Hopefully you guys like the Liberty Meadows picture just as much.

Gav Heryng · 07-10-2007, 12:08 PM

This looks really good. For a personal preference, I think the Human Torch would look better - more "on fire", I mean - without a dark outline.

Dis

07-08-2007, 10:08 PM	#1
Hanzou Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 915	Fantastic Four I missed the deadline for this drawoff since I was out of town. Here was my entry anyway, so let me know what you guys think of it;

07-10-2007, 12:08 PM	#12
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07-08-2007, 10:41 PM	#2
BlaiddDrwg Registered User Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Utah, United States Posts: 28	I absolutely adore this style. It's something a haven't seen before; a cross between a cartoon style and a more serious style. Definitely look great. The only thing that stands out is Sue's left hand looks a little big. Still, great piece.

07-08-2007, 11:08 PM	#3
NGoff Biker Chick Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Virginia Posts: 674	Very nice tonal rendering there, Hanzou! Especially on the thing with the light of the HT. Speaking of which, although you have great melding of characters in the design, he may be too much of a tangent with Mr. F. Maybe if you brought the HT's flame tail more into the BG behind Mr. F (like you started a bit) and at a sharper angle just where it meets him. Not literally sharp....just curved more, you know? Great stuff, can't wait for more! -Nicole =)

07-08-2007, 11:13 PM	#4
rplatt Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: San Jose, CA Posts: 439	Very impressive! Great work, Hanzou!

07-09-2007, 12:48 AM	#5
xaltair Boobies Master Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,315	Very cool, sue storm doesn't quite seem to fit in though.

07-09-2007, 09:42 AM	#6
joh james Artist, Writer, Director. Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Montreal, Quebec Posts: 1,136	It has a brushwork feel in some places. Almost Painterly. Damn shame it didn't make print. Good luck, Hanzou. Some high caliber stuff on your hands!

07-09-2007, 01:38 PM	#7
JLillustrator Artist for Hire! Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Wesley Chapel, FL Posts: 164	Really nice work with the tones/grays used to define form and volume. Great looking characters, just watch I.W.'s hands, make them smaller than her face and you are good to go. Javier www.comicspace.com/jlugographics

07-09-2007, 09:03 PM	#8
Saul Haber Registered User Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,589	Really smooth grays. They're very beautiful. The Thing looks a little awkward, though, but this is some really nice work.

07-10-2007, 05:33 AM	#9
The-Spirit Registered User Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 3,151	Very nice, I'd love to see a BW book done completely like this. It pops out really well.

07-10-2007, 07:02 AM	#10
Necromancer XI I color things! Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: france Posts: 941	wow awesome man really your grayscaling is admirable you got yourself a new fan take care Ross

07-10-2007, 12:05 PM	#11
Hanzou Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 915	Wow, thanks for the comments everyone. Hopefully you guys like the Liberty Meadows picture just as much.