Card Set

Jasen Smith · 06-15-2007, 07:03 AM

I've been currently doing a set of cards in this style. Let me know what you think.

Jasen Smith · 06-16-2007, 12:56 AM

Made some changes to the pics.

Got more coming soon plus I need to work on the layouts.

Thunder Rat · 06-16-2007, 01:03 AM

The bearded guy looks a lot better with the white outline around his hair. Nice style.

Jasen Smith · 06-16-2007, 06:03 AM

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Originally Posted by Thunder Rat

The bearded guy looks a lot better with the white outline around his hair. Nice style.

Thanks T. Rat!

Willustrator · 06-16-2007, 06:09 AM

Actually i prefer teh black outline. Maybe if you gave him a black outline around the exterior of the hair??

Jasen Smith · 06-16-2007, 06:32 AM

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Originally Posted by Willustrator

Actually i prefer teh black outline. Maybe if you gave him a black outline around the exterior of the hair??

Hmmm so many choices.

I was thinking of taking the white out on his right our left.
Making it more grayed out...what do you guys think?

John Rauch · 06-16-2007, 09:45 AM

Dude, you're getting so much better! Keep it up!

Jasen Smith · 06-16-2007, 06:07 PM

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Originally Posted by EraserX

Dude, you're getting so much better! Keep it up!

Thanks John!!

These new glasses are working I guess. HAHA

Jasen Smith · 06-16-2007, 11:25 PM

Man, I'm having a tuff time trying to find ideas for borders for my cards here.
I need to make some symbols and I got everything else ready...but don't know what style I want for the borders.....any ideas?

sevans · 06-17-2007, 10:53 PM

Digging the creepy bald alien/guy.

The second guy with black hair, his hair looks too perfect and round, as if its sitting on his head and not attached (like a bad wig).

And I prefer the black outline on the older guy. If you change one outline, I think you need to change more, so that it doesn't stand out and seem out of place.

Jasen Smith · 06-17-2007, 11:17 PM

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Originally Posted by sevans

And I prefer the black outline on the older guy. If you change one outline, I think you need to change more, so that it doesn't stand out and seem out of place.

It may be the halo that is showing up...I do need to make changes to it because it stands out too much.

Thnx again though.

Jasen Smith · 06-19-2007, 05:59 AM

Unfinished in the colors and editing of the inks and names.
But wanted to show ya guys what I've got so far.

Thanks for looking.

Biofungus · 06-19-2007, 06:10 AM

Change the views. All of the figures are facing the same exact way (and on some, the eyes aren't even).

Jasen Smith · 06-19-2007, 06:17 AM

True I did think about changing the views and for the eyes I will fix those as well. Also need to fix the horn on the one guy.

For some reason I dont notice the eyes on paper until I scan them in.

Thanks though

06-15-2007, 07:03 AM	#1
Jasen Smith Lee Nordling is my hero Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: My own mind Posts: 3,937	Card Set I've been currently doing a set of cards in this style. Let me know what you think.

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06-16-2007, 12:56 AM	#2
Jasen Smith Lee Nordling is my hero Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: My own mind Posts: 3,937	Made some changes to the pics. Got more coming soon plus I need to work on the layouts.

06-16-2007, 01:03 AM	#3
Thunder Rat Exhausted from sitting... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Third planet from the sun. Posts: 371	The bearded guy looks a lot better with the white outline around his hair. Nice style.

06-16-2007, 06:09 AM	#5
Willustrator Will Sliney Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 216	Actually i prefer teh black outline. Maybe if you gave him a black outline around the exterior of the hair??

06-16-2007, 09:45 AM	#7
John Rauch The problem with comics. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Decatur, Illinois Posts: 737	Dude, you're getting so much better! Keep it up!

06-16-2007, 11:25 PM	#9
Jasen Smith Lee Nordling is my hero Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: My own mind Posts: 3,937	Man, I'm having a tuff time trying to find ideas for borders for my cards here. I need to make some symbols and I got everything else ready...but don't know what style I want for the borders.....any ideas?

06-17-2007, 10:53 PM	#10
sevans www.sevans.co.nz Join Date: May 2004 Location: behind you ...... MotherF**KER! Posts: 4,525	Digging the creepy bald alien/guy. The second guy with black hair, his hair looks too perfect and round, as if its sitting on his head and not attached (like a bad wig). And I prefer the black outline on the older guy. If you change one outline, I think you need to change more, so that it doesn't stand out and seem out of place.

06-19-2007, 05:59 AM	#12
Jasen Smith Lee Nordling is my hero Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: My own mind Posts: 3,937	Unfinished in the colors and editing of the inks and names. But wanted to show ya guys what I've got so far. Thanks for looking.

06-19-2007, 06:10 AM	#13
Biofungus Not for your amusement Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Nega-Earth Posts: 22,083	Change the views. All of the figures are facing the same exact way (and on some, the eyes aren't even).

06-19-2007, 06:17 AM	#14
Jasen Smith Lee Nordling is my hero Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: My own mind Posts: 3,937	True I did think about changing the views and for the eyes I will fix those as well. Also need to fix the horn on the one guy. For some reason I dont notice the eyes on paper until I scan them in. Thanks though