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Old 05-25-2007, 04:12 AM   #1
Taj Gunn
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3 page script

Spider-man in "Nature and Metal"

Page 1

Panel 1

Wide panel. Side view of Spider-man swinging next to a building. It's night time. He is on a daily routine mission of patrolling the city. You could see the Empire State Building from far away.

SP: No crime. Guest Frank KILLED them all.

Panel 2

Above shot of Spidey sitting on a building. His mask off and on his right hand. He is holding his hand with his left hand. He is depressed.

SP: Aw... why me?

Panel 3

Full face. Spidey looking alert. A strange light are surrounding head.

SP: Thank God!

Panel 4

Same shot. Spidey Putting on his mask.

Page 2

Panel 1

Long Panel. Spider-man being punched in the face by Iron Man's hand. I don't want this to be a big super-hero punch. I want this to be real and gritty. Blood spilling in the mask.

Panel 2

Spidey staggering on the building top floor to get up.

SP: This isn't good PR, Tone.

IM (off-pan.): I'm here to talk.

SP: By beatin' the @#!$ outta me. How sweet of you!


Panel 3

Face shot of Iron man.

IM: I'm here to arrest you, Pete.

SP: For the fortieth time?

IM: Don't play, Peter.


Panel 4

Mid-body of Spidey wiping his bare face after removing his mask.

IM: You're Getting your ass stomped.

Page 3

Panel 1

Face shot. Spider-man put his mask back on. Iron Man is reflected off the eyes

SP: Come get it, Tin can!


Panel 2

small panel. Spidey right hand as it slings web.

Panel 3

Mid-shot of Iron man. The web is slinged on Iron Man's face.

Panel 4

Spider-man pulls the web. mid shot

Panel 5

Iron-man has his mask snatched.

Panel 6

Full face shot of Spidey.

SP: Hallow shell, huh ?
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Old 05-28-2007, 09:06 PM   #2
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