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Registered User
Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 40
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Cover2: I.Crisis/JimLee
inks by me...hope you like it!
CC welcome |
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Piss Off
Join Date: Jan 2002
Posts: 9,367
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Only thing I don't like is those little tick marks before the small lines. After awhile it just looks strange. Other than that nice stuff.
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The Adventure Fails
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: Very mean and nasty place
Posts: 282
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good job on the speed lines
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Artist/Inker
Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: In a Ink Bottle!
Posts: 695
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I second that. Good speedlines! The best advise I have for you is that an inker brings clarity to the page. Whe you have a loose penciler you have to be the finisher. Remember inking is drawing too.
Good Luck, -JIM |
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Allergic to Shark Attacks
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: The Great State of Perpetual Longing
Posts: 1,877
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Good call, Banky. And in the name of clarity, keep an eye out for too much texture. Yes, it's a fight scene, but with enough scratch lines worked onto the figures, you may force the piece to be colored before it looks finished. You should be able to look at a piece and call it finished befor eit gets to the colorist.
Good stuff though. ps: You've recieved my 666th post. Whatever happens to you today isn't my fault. Last edited by Spacious Interior; 05-09-2007 at 12:50 PM. |
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Ed says 'Hi!'
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: NC
Posts: 939
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As always, some really slick work, sir. I do agree with Justice41 on the tickmarks. Not too overly distracting but noticeable nonetheless. One other nitpick if I may - the heavy line on Superboy's right forearm seems off to me. I'd have done it thinner with it getting thicker as it comes to the forepart of the arm. Just my one cent...
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