Spider-Man

angel t · 04-03-2007, 10:30 PM

i wanted to see how it would be if i pencilled, inked and colored my own work and this is what came out.
im pretty happy with the results

hope u all enjoy

im also open for commission if anyone is interested

jaxel · 04-03-2007, 11:23 PM

looks good for the most part. Theres something wrong with the postion and the foreshortening on the left leg however. Nicely inked and colured but the eye is immediately drawn to that leg.

aerosoul · 04-04-2007, 01:27 AM

yeah, that leg is oddly bent at the thigh. that weird highlight on the crotch is throwing me off too...i'm not supposed to be drawn to the crotch! ;]

other than that, i wish i would have done this piece myself... you're definitely a talented artist!

kboykb · 04-04-2007, 01:35 AM

You should be proud, this is a good piece but the foreshortened leg is really off, it's in a painful position. I don't know if that's even humanly possible

But the rest is great man, I like the colors too.

Mcd91 · 04-04-2007, 03:17 AM

Hi,

As everybody's commenting on the weird distortion of the left leg I felt the need to support your doing. It is Spiderman we are talking about, he can twist and distort his arms and legs in more ways than us normal humble humans.

I am aware that almost everyone complains about MacFarlane's Spiderman nowadays, but I still love his version, because of the extreme angles and shots he put him in.

So, I like your pic.

Best

Rob

K.E. Woolfork · 04-04-2007, 08:15 AM

Reminds me a lot of the Turner/ Stiegerwald art and colors team.

VERY strong image IMO.

Post more.

k.

captainarian · 04-04-2007, 01:45 PM

stunning as usual.

i feel the lleg is a bit too thick but it's good.

angel t · 04-04-2007, 04:30 PM

thanks

dont forget that spidey is a lot more flexible than the average person but i will get around to the crotch area and dem the light on it

the leg some say its right some say its wrong

trust me when i say it is a loooot better than what it was b4
hmmmmm....take a look X.x not a pretty sight....

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y16.../spiderman.jpg

jaxel · 04-04-2007, 08:43 PM

I know spiderman is flexible but he can't change where his muscles connect to his pelvis. It's a good picture but that leg is distracting is all i'm sayin'

OZ! · 04-05-2007, 02:42 AM

Love the spiderman(the leg doesn't bother me so much, its originality wins points) but the bg being pasted in doesn't look right. Good stuff anyhoo.

angel t · 04-05-2007, 09:19 AM

thanks oz
the BG just seemed right to put there to represent New York i didnt want a full bg drawing so i came up with this idea

Jaxel i got wat ur saying ^_^

04-03-2007, 10:30 PM	#1
angel t Registered User Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 93	Spider-Man i wanted to see how it would be if i pencilled, inked and colored my own work and this is what came out. im pretty happy with the results hope u all enjoy im also open for commission if anyone is interested

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04-03-2007, 11:23 PM	#2
jaxel Registered User Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 40	looks good for the most part. Theres something wrong with the postion and the foreshortening on the left leg however. Nicely inked and colured but the eye is immediately drawn to that leg.

04-04-2007, 01:27 AM	#3
aerosoul return to sender Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: atwater, ca. Posts: 320	yeah, that leg is oddly bent at the thigh. that weird highlight on the crotch is throwing me off too...i'm not supposed to be drawn to the crotch! ;] other than that, i wish i would have done this piece myself... you're definitely a talented artist!

04-04-2007, 01:35 AM	#4
kboykb Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 32	You should be proud, this is a good piece but the foreshortened leg is really off, it's in a painful position. I don't know if that's even humanly possible But the rest is great man, I like the colors too.

04-04-2007, 03:17 AM	#5
Mcd91 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Hannover/Germany Posts: 364	Hi, As everybody's commenting on the weird distortion of the left leg I felt the need to support your doing. It is Spiderman we are talking about, he can twist and distort his arms and legs in more ways than us normal humble humans. I am aware that almost everyone complains about MacFarlane's Spiderman nowadays, but I still love his version, because of the extreme angles and shots he put him in. So, I like your pic. Best Rob

04-04-2007, 08:15 AM	#6
K.E. Woolfork aka wolfprime Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Baghdad, Iraq Posts: 561	Reminds me a lot of the Turner/ Stiegerwald art and colors team. VERY strong image IMO. Post more. k.

04-04-2007, 01:45 PM	#7
captainarian likest draw ur characters Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: currently Tehran-Iran Posts: 1,542	stunning as usual. i feel the lleg is a bit too thick but it's good.

04-04-2007, 04:30 PM	#8
angel t Registered User Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 93	thanks dont forget that spidey is a lot more flexible than the average person but i will get around to the crotch area and dem the light on it the leg some say its right some say its wrong trust me when i say it is a loooot better than what it was b4 hmmmmm....take a look X.x not a pretty sight.... http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y16.../spiderman.jpg

04-04-2007, 08:43 PM	#9
jaxel Registered User Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 40	I know spiderman is flexible but he can't change where his muscles connect to his pelvis. It's a good picture but that leg is distracting is all i'm sayin'

04-05-2007, 02:42 AM	#10
OZ! All Powerful Wizard Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Texas Posts: 4,501	Love the spiderman(the leg doesn't bother me so much, its originality wins points) but the bg being pasted in doesn't look right. Good stuff anyhoo.

04-05-2007, 09:19 AM	#11
angel t Registered User Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 93	thanks oz the BG just seemed right to put there to represent New York i didnt want a full bg drawing so i came up with this idea Jaxel i got wat ur saying ^_^