8 page story

shawn381 · 04-02-2007, 08:12 PM

This was a rush job done for an anthology published this year by 803 studios. I have mixed feelings about the result - I was pretty rusty, but it did serve to get me back into drawing comics after a long hiatus. Anyway, please have a look. This was 8 pages pencilled and inked in two weeks (and I have a full time job and two kids...). The story was written by Ian Thomas and the printed version has lettering and all, but I fugured this was the piece of the puzzle I did and I'd like to see if the pictures stand on their own.

shawn381 · 04-09-2007, 07:12 PM

seriously...127 views, not one comment? anyway - just a lame attempt to get my pages to the top of the list...maybe generate some viewpoints...maybe not...sigh...working in a vacuum...

W. Smith · 04-09-2007, 09:44 PM

I think the story telling is very good..

Maybe you just put too much in one bucket. Writers have the same problem..too much and no one wants to take the time...next time just try one or two pages

jemurr · 04-12-2007, 03:06 AM

That's pretty wild. I liked the end too. Did he travel through time or something, or was it "all a dream"?

04-02-2007, 08:12 PM	#1
shawn381 Artist Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 47	8 page story This was a rush job done for an anthology published this year by 803 studios. I have mixed feelings about the result - I was pretty rusty, but it did serve to get me back into drawing comics after a long hiatus. Anyway, please have a look. This was 8 pages pencilled and inked in two weeks (and I have a full time job and two kids...). The story was written by Ian Thomas and the printed version has lettering and all, but I fugured this was the piece of the puzzle I did and I'd like to see if the pictures stand on their own.

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04-09-2007, 07:12 PM	#2
shawn381 Artist Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 47	seriously...127 views, not one comment? anyway - just a lame attempt to get my pages to the top of the list...maybe generate some viewpoints...maybe not...sigh...working in a vacuum...

04-09-2007, 09:44 PM	#3
W. Smith W. Smith Publications Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: DFW TX Posts: 108	I think the story telling is very good.. Maybe you just put too much in one bucket. Writers have the same problem..too much and no one wants to take the time...next time just try one or two pages

04-12-2007, 03:06 AM	#4
jemurr Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Seoul South Korea Posts: 14	That's pretty wild. I liked the end too. Did he travel through time or something, or was it "all a dream"?