Lights...camera...

scherzo · 02-02-2007, 01:43 AM

ACTION!

-scherzo

chrisperguidi · 02-02-2007, 03:02 AM

awsome.

chrisperguidi · 02-02-2007, 03:04 AM

do you have a web site?

Newbs · 02-02-2007, 05:56 AM

cock the hamma it's time for action, cock the hamma!! these are sweet

xaltair · 02-02-2007, 11:25 AM

Very cool, how come the girl on the wall doesn't have any shoes on?

JonHParrish · 02-02-2007, 11:31 AM

The whole spider man thing, I'm guessing.

She can't do it with shoes on.

SIN 78 · 02-02-2007, 12:56 PM

Good art, I like your detailing.

scherzo · 02-02-2007, 03:49 PM

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do you have a web site?

not just yet chrisperguidi. I should have something up and running before summer hits. Thanks for commenting.

-Mark

Fahnon · 02-02-2007, 05:27 PM

My thoughts:

I really like the dualling solid white dress and all in shadow baddie. Helps visually differenciate her from him in an almost fine arts way.

All the carnage laying around looks good too. Nice and random.

The hand in the foreground helps the scene look more three dimensional.

Is that a schoolbus in the background? If it is then this one has reached all new levels of horror for you

Before you ask yes I did notice the Skytech battleaxe in the background.

I saw the second one already a while back so you know my thoughts on that one.

Good stuff.

-Fahnon

Biofungus · 02-02-2007, 05:49 PM

That's funny, as I feel the opposite way about the top image. I think if you could get a better view of the bad guy, it would add weight to the girl holding the gun behind her back.

scherzo · 02-03-2007, 04:57 AM

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cock the hamma it's time for action, cock the hamma!! these are sweet

Hey Newbs! I'm thinking now "cock the hamma" is going to replace "it's clobberin' time" in the good guy battle cry lexicon. Load and load!

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Very cool, how come the girl on the wall doesn't have any shoes on?

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The whole spider man thing, I'm guessing.

Reaper 2.0 is correct xaltair. Bare feet are essential when making like a buggy superhero. It's murder on the ‘ol waffle stompers, but great fun at parties.

Thanks for posting.

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Good art, I like your detailing.

Thanks SIN 78

back in just a bit...

j giar · 02-03-2007, 11:10 AM

Nice work as always Mark. You know I'm a fan of your stuff anyway. Even though I'm not a manga fan...your stuff is always recognizable and original. I agree with bio about the villain. Even the slightest bit of lights punching through the blacks..maybe in the clothing...or even some of the tendrils. Just to give the reader a peek. Nice and energetic.

scherzo · 02-04-2007, 01:29 AM

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My thoughts:

I really like the dualling solid white dress and all in shadow baddie. Helps visually differenciate her from him in an almost fine arts way.

All the carnage laying around looks good too. Nice and random.

The hand in the foreground helps the scene look more three dimensional.

Is that a schoolbus in the background? If it is then this one has reached all new levels of horror for you

Before you ask yes I did notice the Skytech battleaxe in the background.

I saw the second one already a while back so you know my thoughts on that one.

Good stuff.

Thanks Fahnon.

No schoolbus back there(although now that you raise the notion, hmmmm...) That was my hurried interpretation of an old produce truck. The skytech axe makes frequent guest appearances in everything draw. Usually when there's space to fill, and I can't think of anything else.

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That's funny, as I feel the opposite way about the top image. I think if you could get a better view of the bad guy, it would add weight to the girl holding the gun behind her back.

Thanks for posting Biofungus.

"Blessing's" rogue police force have gone through a variety of designs. The one I finally settled on has been drawn so many times these past few months, I made the mistake of forgetting I'm about the only person able to fill in the missing visual blanks.

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Nice work as always Mark. You know I'm a fan of your stuff anyway. Even though I'm not a manga fan...your stuff is always recognizable and original. I agree with bio about the villain. Even the slightest bit of lights punching through the blacks..maybe in the clothing...or even some of the tendrils. Just to give the reader a peek. Nice and energetic.

Thanks jgiar.

Definitely an interesting suggestion. It actually would probably only take a half hour or so to pencil in a fully rendered deputy and see how it comes out. Maybe I'll post a new version later.

-Mark

02-02-2007, 01:43 AM	#1
scherzo I know things Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Kew Gardens, NY Posts: 1,056	Lights...camera... ACTION! -scherzo

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Fahnon Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Brooklyn Posts: 111	My thoughts: I really like the dualling solid white dress and all in shadow baddie. Helps visually differenciate her from him in an almost fine arts way. All the carnage laying around looks good too. Nice and random. The hand in the foreground helps the scene look more three dimensional. Is that a schoolbus in the background? If it is then this one has reached all new levels of horror for you Before you ask yes I did notice the Skytech battleaxe in the background. I saw the second one already a while back so you know my thoughts on that one. Good stuff. -Fahnon Last edited by Fahnon; 02-02-2007 at 05:41 PM.

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chrisperguidi Registered User Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: morgan hill Posts: 88	awsome.

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xaltair Boobies Master Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,315	Very cool, how come the girl on the wall doesn't have any shoes on?

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JonHParrish Still Around Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Indiana Posts: 1,029	The whole spider man thing, I'm guessing. She can't do it with shoes on.

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Biofungus Not for your amusement Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Nega-Earth Posts: 22,083	That's funny, as I feel the opposite way about the top image. I think if you could get a better view of the bad guy, it would add weight to the girl holding the gun behind her back.

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j giar Has nothing to add. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Elyria, Ohio Posts: 5,968	Nice work as always Mark. You know I'm a fan of your stuff anyway. Even though I'm not a manga fan...your stuff is always recognizable and original. I agree with bio about the villain. Even the slightest bit of lights punching through the blacks..maybe in the clothing...or even some of the tendrils. Just to give the reader a peek. Nice and energetic.