some pics from my indy comic. Please Critic

[mid_knight01]

This is one of the Mid-Knight hitting a member of a Vampire BoyBand. N'Suck.


This is MK being drained of his powers.
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After taking a beating

The main pantsless villian
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and manga Mid-knight
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[stupidstufftosay]

I'll tell you.

Normally, Neal Adams always said there's two kinds of bad art samples.

The first is the kind that show you there's a glimmer of understanding and potential.

And then there's the ones that just show nothing, and, supposedly, he's never seen anyone in this latter category ever go on to do anything.

This stuff is sort of right in the middle.

You have a nice sense of DRAMA. I think there's a really dramatic, rootin; tootin' picture in your head, but your hands just aren't there yet.

You don't show any real knowledge of how light falls across a form. And your figures aren't well put together. (I hate to talk about anatomy, because a lot of greats have their own version of anatomy).

I'd say, put the color away and keep drawing, draw from life, draw from models, use reference.

Then we'll see.

[MechaShiva]

Originally Posted by stupidstufftosay

I'll tell you.

Normally, Neal Adams always said there's two kinds of bad art samples.

The first is the kind that show you there's a glimmer of understanding and potential.

And then there's the ones that just show nothing, and, supposedly, he's never seen anyone in this latter category ever go on to do anything.

This stuff is sort of right in the middle.

You have a nice sense of DRAMA. I think there's a really dramatic, rootin; tootin' picture in your head, but your hands just aren't there yet.

You don't show any real knowledge of how light falls across a form. And your figures aren't well put together. (I hate to talk about anatomy, because a lot of greats have their own version of anatomy).

I'd say, put the color away and keep drawing, draw from life, draw from models, use reference.

Then we'll see.

I agree also the vampire in the top pic should either be falling to the left or the middle, depending on if the character gave the old left hook or upper cut, not falling to the right. You have the potential, you just need more practice.