in with the old

scherzo · 01-15-2007, 05:31 AM

I posted this splash from a 22 page story of mine way back in April of last year in pencil form. Unlike my "KimPossible" pin up, it's way too old to grave dig back to page1 even if the ink job is brand new, so a new posting was clearly in order.(yes...I'm in a bit of an inking mode lately) C&C welcome as always...

btw this is page 4 but the full story is still readable in the writer's forum for anyone interested in the disastrous events that follow this shot.

http://www.digitalwebbing.com/forums...ad.php?t=90009
-Mark

sevans · 01-15-2007, 02:40 PM

Nice clean inking to go with a nice clean style. Can't see any obvious areas to crit.

**steveo** · 01-15-2007, 02:48 PM

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Originally Posted by scherzo

I posted this splash from a 22 page story of mine way back in April of last year in pencil form. Unlike my "KimPossible" pin up, it's way too old to grave dig back to page1 even if the ink job is brand new, so a new posting was clearly in order.(yes...I'm in a bit of an inking mode lately) C&C welcome as always...

btw this is page 4 but the full story is still readable in the writer's forum for anyone interested in the disastrous events that follow this shot.

http://www.digitalwebbing.com/forums...ad.php?t=90009
-Mark

Shouldn't it read: "I've KNOWN sexi..."

Sorry...

SteveO
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scherzo · 01-15-2007, 02:54 PM

good catch steveo. I re-lettered this in about 10 minutes and missed that typo.

now fixed. thanks

-Mark

Barnaby · 01-15-2007, 03:00 PM

I like it very much! I would just give the tires a little rotation movement, but apart from that, real nice!

scherzo · 01-15-2007, 11:13 PM

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Nice clean inking to go with a nice clean style. Can't see any obvious areas to crit.

Thanks for posting sevans. This is one of the few things I've completed in the last 3 years that actually looks noticably improved to me after inking.

Quote:

I like it very much! I would just give the tires a little rotation movement, but apart from that, real nice!

Thanks Barnaby. I actually thought about adding a motion blur effect in photoshop but chickened out. Maybe I'll play around with that later.

-Mark

Lord Fejj · 01-16-2007, 12:07 AM

Reminds me of an odd mix of Victor Moscoso, Max Fleisher, and old original Astro Boy cartoons...Nice!

scherzo · 01-18-2007, 12:05 AM

^Interesting observation Fejj. In all the responses I've received here, I almost never hear other artists names mentioned. I do love Fleischer's Popeye so maybe there's some subconscious influence. hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

-Mark

j giar · 01-18-2007, 08:29 AM

Liked it the first time....and still like it, Mark. About time you started posting stuff again.

01-15-2007, 05:31 AM	#1
scherzo I know things Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Kew Gardens, NY Posts: 1,070	in with the old I posted this splash from a 22 page story of mine way back in April of last year in pencil form. Unlike my "KimPossible" pin up, it's way too old to grave dig back to page1 even if the ink job is brand new, so a new posting was clearly in order.(yes...I'm in a bit of an inking mode lately) C&C welcome as always... btw this is page 4 but the full story is still readable in the writer's forum for anyone interested in the disastrous events that follow this shot. http://www.digitalwebbing.com/forums...ad.php?t=90009 -Mark Last edited by scherzo; 01-16-2007 at 12:50 AM.

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01-15-2007, 02:40 PM	#2
sevans www.sevans.co.nz Join Date: May 2004 Location: behind you ...... MotherF**KER! Posts: 4,543	Nice clean inking to go with a nice clean style. Can't see any obvious areas to crit.

01-15-2007, 02:54 PM	#4
scherzo I know things Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Kew Gardens, NY Posts: 1,070	good catch steveo. I re-lettered this in about 10 minutes and missed that typo. now fixed. thanks -Mark

01-15-2007, 03:00 PM	#5
Barnaby The man with no plan! Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Portugal Posts: 482	I like it very much! I would just give the tires a little rotation movement, but apart from that, real nice!

01-16-2007, 12:07 AM	#7
Lord Fejj Be water my friend... Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The Tang Dynasty Posts: 1,597	Reminds me of an odd mix of Victor Moscoso, Max Fleisher, and old original Astro Boy cartoons...Nice!

01-18-2007, 12:05 AM	#8
scherzo I know things Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Kew Gardens, NY Posts: 1,070	^Interesting observation Fejj. In all the responses I've received here, I almost never hear other artists names mentioned. I do love Fleischer's Popeye so maybe there's some subconscious influence. hmmmmmmmmmmmmm -Mark

01-18-2007, 08:29 AM	#9
j giar Has nothing to add. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Elyria, Ohio Posts: 6,002	Liked it the first time....and still like it, Mark. About time you started posting stuff again.